this was really good! continue, i will be waiting!!

Why did I ever leave ff?? I wish I had more time to write. I never realized how much I miss it now.
This was just what I needed. I needed something depressing and uplifting at the same time. :)
You're my hero, Erin.

I liked that a lot. Next chapter please!

I liked this very much. You've pinned her emotions exactly.

One small mistake that I noticed, though. "...bewitched by moonlight and too-blue eyes..." Should be two?

Hey look! You still got it girl. Sure, it's not a completely new idea, but I still love the way you write it (which is better than most). None too shabby... or sappy. Good job.
kt

I really want you to continue. I could fell butterflys in me fluttering. It was exciting please make another chapter.

I really like this. You go Alanna no guy is worth your tears unless they are tears of joy! Update soon please!

*coppereyes*

omg that was soo sad. Poor Alanna. I like the amount of detail you went into her feelings. great job. update soon please.
Caiti

omg...that was heartbreaking... very well written, indeed. is this a one-shot, or is there more coming?

and if you don't mind my asking, where did this come from all of a sudden?

alanna22039 :D

ah - so sweet and lovely :)