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| Essence-chan 2008-08-21 ch 4,  | abuseits about time you updated. i have been waiting. i am so hooked on your stories, its unreal. please update soon. |
| LunarStar Princess Krystal 2008-08-16 ch 4, | abuseWow so now we really know, Diamond has finally had realization hit him hard and may even be helpful to the group, except I have my doubts about how the group are going to welcome Ruby. Also I want to say that I really liked how you had Rini become Vegeta's calming solution and it would be funny to see what happens when they train together. Its going to be an amazing story I can already tell. I can't wait to read what you come up with next so Please Update Soon ^V^ |
| "Lyn" of the Crystalia Sist... 2008-08-05 ch 3, anon. | abuseThis story is still an amazing one! I hope to see another chapter or two of this story soon! Ja ne! Lyn |
| miguelnuva 2008-03-27 ch 3, | abuseWow this was a good battle scene can't wait to see more. Love how Rini and Gohan were outclassed it makes the story more intresting but I think Rini should end up the strongest warrior as a Super Saiyan. please update soon and review my story the future isn't always set in stone. |
| Wild Horsefeathers8753 2008-03-26 ch 1, | abuseVery good. Wow, even more bad guys than before. Glad Diamond is trying to keep his word. I wish I could read it all tonight, but I have to go do homework now. Hopefully more reading and reviewing tomorrow! |
| Lady-Raini 2008-02-14 ch 3, | abuseKawaii-ness! can't wait till the next chapter! |
| LunarStar Princess Krystal 2008-02-12 ch 3, | abuseI loved what you had happen when Serena and Trunks told the group about their being engaged, but the battle I really hoped that you wouldn't have the other saiyans that strong. I hope that you write more soon and tell us what happens to the group so, Please Update Soon ^V^ |
| nekoinukid 2008-02-12 ch 3, | abusei like the story |
| iamkagomeiloveinuyasha 2008-02-12 ch 3, | abuseupdate soon so they're after rini then? or um i stupid and they're after sERENA Or are they after both of 'em i was hoping they'd be after serena again ya know casue shes like all powerful and such (SHES SO AWESOME!) Update soon! love the fic! |
| Essence-chan 2008-01-28 ch 2, | abusei love it. update soon |
| nekoinukid 2008-01-19 ch 2, | abusei love the story so far. i really liked this chapter |
| Lukevader 2008-01-18 ch 2, | abuseThat was a really nice chapter! So i'm guessing for the moment you're focusing each chapter on 1 of the groups? (Dark moon & Z-Fighters/Sailors) Lookin' forward to how you're gonna play out Vegeta's handling of Gohan/Rini, I can picture some tantrums! Lookin' forward to the next chapter! So keep up the excellent writing and update soon! |
| LunarStar Princess Krystal 2008-01-18 ch 2, | abuseYay, that was such a beautiful chapter, I feel so happy inside from what you wrote, and I don't know what else to say, but this I can't wait to read more. Please Update Soon ^V^ |
| iamkagomeiloveinuyasha 2008-01-17 ch 2, | abuseDUDE AWESOME! OMG! YAY THEY'RE GONNA GET MARRIED! you totally gotta update asap! |
| nekoinukid 2008-01-11 ch 1, | abusei like the story so far |