ohoh...Jazz in trouble now. I like it, can't wait for more.

Wow that's hot! Continue writing!

Whoa?!

now that was an awesome chapter. can't wait to see how sunny and screamer do for heidi. and its about time with jazz and may. awesome chapter. update soon please.

No! Prowl pooped their party! Was so thrilled about the fact that Jazz did this, hope he can convince Prowl to mind his business. Starscream-who can resist but what a tough choice...

wow Jazz really wanted to you know with May huh and i hope the two are really in love now and one about Starscream and Heidi i hope there is romance in between them and please write more!

very, very good...I caught a few wee mistakes but you were took away from them as the chapter continued...Good job your doing great.

lol poor Prowl is to late
ohh well Jazz and May got what they wanted lol

can i ask if prowl and jazz are an item? or are they like dating?
awesome chapter. update soon please. prowl's jealous ain't he? hehehehehe.

Primus 1 girl is on her period and the other one just had a "wet" dream lol
i feel bad for all these mechs

tell me more!!

That was simply brilliant, I loved it very well done chick total double thumbs up *hugs*

Argh! You tease! My mind is already mentally adding to this...;0

Oh wow! Poor May,lol! I bet Sunny won't carry Heidi for a few days!
Really love this story, hope for serious romance in the next chapter...please?

*dies from laughter*


That was great...simply hilarious I loved every bit of it...And whats this...Is there a little something happening between Heidi and Sunny...XD