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| FollowTheRobin 2008-09-10 ch 7,  | abuseThis is one of the wittiest, funniest things I've read in a long, long while. You got me laughing out loud a lot of times, and even though I've kind of abandoned the ReixKai pairing I enjoyed it, and got all girly by their awkward moments. I can't wait for more! |
| Ossifrage 2008-09-01 ch 7, | abusePeople's names are difficult to get...remembering them is just as hard. Poor Rei... Anyways! I love this so far! I really look forward to seeing what happens next! |
| Killproduct 2008-08-17 ch 7, | abuseaw short chapter XD but I promise to be here for the next ^^ |
| Alaena Flame Dragonstar 2008-07-18 ch 7, | abuseThis is very interesting ^_^ Very well written and I like the pace. I hope you can write more soon. |
| sonata hirano 2008-07-11 ch 7, | abuselove it so far, cant wait for the next chapter |
| rebecca85 2008-07-07 ch 7, | abuseAm I being stupid, or why can't I seem to understand that last scene? O.o After Kai says that Rei can still come up because one of them should be there, it all starts to get little fuzzy. Why does he say that? Why doen't Rei want to see Boris? Why should Rei call Kai first (regardless that he doesn't have the number)? Wait. Was Yuriy released from the hospital? Am I really missing something here? HAVE I SKIPPED CHAPTER SIX?! *frantic searching* ...no. *sigh of relief* I didn't skip it. But... *reads convo yet again* Ok, I get why he doesn't want to see Boris. I wouldn't either! Well, maybe if Yuriy was there to break the ice. |
| Manuca 2008-07-02 ch 7, | abuseI felt awkward around them xD Rei is dealing like any of us would: avoidance...lol who is Mao going out with? poor Rai, being left behind! Bet you that when Rei goes visit Yuriy, Kai will be there (if he doesn't forget to visit, that is). I want to read more! |
| Leikaru 2008-07-02 ch 7, | abusePoor Rei. lol. COntinue please? |
| not the usual baka 2008-07-01 ch 7, | abuseHow awkward that must have been mixing up people's names. Would Rei even dare to ask Kai for his permission to stalk Dranzer now? I wonder what Dranzer's like. Is she going to be a phoenix or something similar like a half eagle half peacock? |
| Different Realities 2008-06-07 ch 6, | abusethat... was great... damn... you rock and i hope you update quickly! |
| Different Realities 2008-06-07 ch 5, | abuse=( aw i dont' know the song! not cool. but nice chapter, the tala bit was a twist and i was really hoping for Rei to shout out "KANE!" at kai, i would have laughed... a lot... kudos |
| Different Realities 2008-06-07 ch 4, | abuseinteresting, that's the best overcap i've ever read and seen. Most of the time when stories have those, i just flat out stop reading. but this was well done, it might have been a wee bit better if you were allowed more characters but, eh. it was a good chapter. |
| Different Realities 2008-06-07 ch 3, | abusehaha, i did look up 'kane'! but i looked it up right as he was brought up. then i giggled, it's clever and twist and i like it. kudos |
| Different Realities 2008-06-07 ch 2, | abuseAi, this was a good chapter too. Seemed to ramble a little bit, like you had to throw things in there because it'd be too short and adding too much more would make it bad to leave off at but it was good. |
| Different Realities 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abuseI can honnestly say, "omg, damn i didn't know you were a writer and a great one at that!" Looks like that contest is doing some good ^.^ but i like all of it, hell i can't even think of things to add/change/fix to make it better because this chapter is wonderful. |