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Kalliana2
2009-11-04 . chapter 21
Love it love it LOVE IT! *waits patiently for more*
Julieanne-Arc
2009-10-04 . chapter 21
I've just spent the last couple of hours reading this, and I love it! I love how progressive it is and how everything seems like such a struggle...which probably sounds saddistic, but I don't know, I really like it. I think a lot of people just try to keep things so fluffy and cutesy all the time, but I definitely appreciate stories like this a lot more. This seems more realistic with all its pain and suffering and the gradual chemistry build up. I also like how well developed Calli's character is, even though there's still a lot we don't know about her. I can really imagine what she would be like in real life. Anyway, I really hope you continue this story, because I really really want to know what happens!
Lucas McDrake
2009-08-09 . chapter 2
Again, exceptionally well written! ^_^ I look forward to the near future, when I can read more of this.
iPodHeadPhones
2009-07-23 . chapter 21
Wow, normally it takes a little bit of time to get back into a story that's been gone for a while, but it was really easy to remember all of the goings-on in this one, and to jump right back in :-D

So, good job, and I hope to see more updates soon

--HeadPhones
Fiction101
2009-07-21 . chapter 21
Welcome back! It's been so long that I nearly forgot how much talent you have. Key word: nearly. I missed this story so much, I'm glad it's back with a bang! I'm looking forward to another speedy--I hope--update.

Happy writing,
Katie
Elizabeth Scott
2009-07-18 . chapter 21
I saw this alert in my mailbox and thought I was seeing things. Ha.

I really loved the dream sequences. I get the feeling its not all in Jakes head...However I can't remember why Callie broke it off with her family in the original story so now I'm doubly confused. Will all that stuff be different too?

Have you been watching So You Think You Can Dance? Cause that would be awesome homework for Callies dance competition. Perhaps this is where you drew your inspiration?

Otherwise, loved seeing this update and am looking forward to more!
WritingxEqualsxHappiness
2009-07-17 . chapter 21
YES! AN UPDATE! it took a few lines to remember everything since its been extremely long since the last update, but everything is back in my head again and this chapter was completely awesome. i've read some very bad fanfiction and it's relieving to read one by someone who can write quite well, so yay! this chapter was awesome and this story is also awesome, so don't wait so long before the next update!
meg
Xxtwilight.obsessedxX
2009-07-17 . chapter 21
YES! your back! haha

i'm so happy u updated. and this chapter is definitely easy to keep up with after all this time. i love contemporary and that tango is majorly steamy! oh damn would jake be jealous! lmao

update asap :D
erica3769
2009-07-06 . chapter 21
So I am finally caught up with Calli and Jake! I can't wait to see what happens next.. I also can't wait to see what really happened to Calli! Are you going to post more soon? I hope so!! Keep up the good work!!
Lili009
2009-06-29 . chapter 20
I just wanted to say that I read your story and I really like it, you are a great writer! I like the fact that you took a different direction than with your other story. Calli is a great character and I'm glad to see her in a totally different storyline than with Half Breed. Anyway, I know you haven't updated in a while, but if you do decide to finish this story, I'll be happy to read it!
BlackwaterLove
2009-03-01 . chapter 21
i love this story and i can't wait for the next chapeter
c
2009-02-04 . chapter 21
I hope you update soon because ur writing is amazing and i luv half breed diaries. I cant wait to see what happens with Calli and Jacob!! :)
Bronze Star
2009-01-24 . chapter 17
cool story!
Sabs7
2008-12-13 . chapter 21
Thanks for the update! I have been wondering if you're still out there.
rockinboyn17
2008-11-20 . chapter 3
great story
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