Wow. That was perfect! Truly amazing!

It's quite a fluffy fic. Adorable in that it depicts their love so well. Great job!

I love the quiet intensity in this piece. Excellent work, my friend!

o.OU Not quite an R-13 rating, and yet, it was so close! XD Oswald's desire for Gwendolyn is very masculine, and it was nice getting an insight into the fight between love and lust within him. ^_^

Gwendolyn was as sweet as usual, though I wonder at the 'small, sly smile' that she gave him. XD Nice bit of alliteration... but... hm, a tad bit too seductive for her? We'll never know.

I'm curious as to why he would leave her alone in the castle though - although it's true that she was his wife and technically had to stay in his castle as her Valkyrie honour had been lost, I would imagine that she would travel with him to search for survivors. But meh, it's a plot device, so you can get away with it. :D

Looking forward to reading more!
Crazylobo

Aww, I used 'his little blue bird' in my fic too. Gosh, isn't this couple amazing!? It was so fluffy and HAWT. Homigosh. Good job. [favityfave]

i love oswald/gwendolyn... we need more fanfiction! XD