Hi,

Could I ask for any mail or something, where I could write? I have an important question, unfortunately I could not find anything like that on your profile...

this is awesome, thanks for making my dreams come true... ;P

i really enjoyed this story, for a first story you did really well! thanks for writing and sharing!

Hi!

I love this story. :)

And because of this I have one request to you: I would love to translate it to Polish and show to Polish fans. Can You give me Your permission to translate it in my language? Of course, I will mention that it is Your story and I only translate it to let other Polish people read it. :)

Answer me in PM or to my mail: .

Keep in touch!

NathalieRoss

really great amazinf story! :D i love edward haha

This is a awesome story, I was really looking forward to Alice's proposal and I was looking forward to them doing something more then kissing. Got me to thinking about what if they were set up on a double date with Alice and Jasper and then many years later got together? Thanks

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Is there a reason Edward's last name changed or was that just a mistake?

what a great story! i just loved it and hope to read more from you!

Hi there!

First of all, thank you soo much for giving me permission to translate this story! I'm really in love with it.

As second, please, could you NOT giving permission to other Russian? 'Cos I want to translate this story 'cos I really liked it. I organize oneself to translate it in future (after ending Envadid Existance - 4 chapters and The Beggining Of Forever - 15 small chapters). You know, it's so disgusting when you opened page with so fimilar title and leraning that this is the story, wich you want to translate. So, that's why I write to you.

I know that I ask too much but, please, giving me permission for this.

Thank you, Dasha.

i love it so far!

LOVED IT!

great too angsty or superficial.

in other words-PERFECT

I thought your story was a different take on how Bella and Edward got together. I enjoyed it and I liked how you portrayed the different pasts of each character, especially the reason for Alice's obsession.

As this is your first FanFiction, I would be tremendously surprised if it was grammatically perfect, but I did want to point out how you often changed verb tenses in one sentence and there were times that you seemed to omit a word, making the sentence mean the opposite of what I think you intended to.

Truly though, for a first work, this was amazing and I applaud all of your effort and thank you for sharing. Kudos, Kim

How can they swim if it's February? Isn't is cold? I'm confusedd.