Fabulous! I love your interpretation of Edward's moods. Keep up the good work, and you really should post file 5 or whichever it was on FictionPress. Please? For me?

Krystel-chan

Very, very nice. Everyone is perfect, even for a scene out of the book. You really know Stephenie's characters!

It was extremely good (I actually wondered once if it was Mrs. Meyer writing!), keep writing, you have some pretty talent, I'd love to read more of what you've written.