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| Fescuekid 2008-04-02 ch 3, anon. | abuseLovey-dovey. Check. Serious. Check. Angsty Revan. Check. Angsty Carth. Che-- oh wait. But it made me laugh anyway. So I forgive you. But seriously, there should be a warning on that thing. I went to bed all depressed and dreamt of bunnies committing suicide. M.. dead bunnies. But yeah. Haha, Dustil and Mission, yay. I always wondered where Carth got off naming his kid Dustil. I personally always wished you could let him go off and be Darth Dustil, and have him show up in the sequel in black eyeliner. |
| Winter Arani 2008-01-15 ch 3, | abuseI really liked this. Hm... a drunk Revan. Look forward to more chapters. |
| general-joseph-dickson 2008-01-10 ch 3, | abuseGreat story. |
| xIgnoranceIsBlissx 2008-01-08 ch 3, | abuse-snort- leave it to Revan to finally see Carth again when she's piss drunk. |
| RandomCheese 2008-01-08 ch 3, anon. | abuseI LUV this story! You want to write more *wave of hand* |
| Uilleand 2008-01-08 ch 3, | abuse"Composing is neat. Decomposing isn’t" Hah!!...I'm keepin' this one in my lexicon... I like this chapter very much! It gives me a lot more of the serious Revan, underneath all the frivolity. |
| Ethereal Vesper 2008-01-08 ch 3, | abuseI really enjoyed that chapter. I wonder what Carth is going to thik when he finds a random gem in his hand when he wakes up. "But it was a dream" haha Anyway good job. |
| Erudasi 2008-01-08 ch 3, | abuseDang it Revan! Why'd you have to go around being drunk? You and Carth, totally the cutest couple in history - get your act together! *ahem* Another good chapter, it's a little sad that Revan was able to convince Carth he was dreaming but eh, it's all good! People will believe whatever they want to believe - especially when they're desperate to believe it. I love your portrayal of a drunken Revan, it's endearing. LOL, wonder what the Admiral will think in the morning when he wakes up with that stone and metal... |
| Lady Tragic 2008-01-07 ch 3, | abuseI want to review... Hehehe. Thish ish all a dream, indeed. Can't wait to see how it turns out. |
| Perturbation 2008-01-06 ch 2, anon. | abuse"Aw, it landed butter-side down. That means you’ll have bad luck today." "I’d be fairly confident that the ashes are actually those of your mother." I was wrong. It's just the tiredness. Your Revan hasn't aged a day!! And she gouged Mission for that dress, oh, bad as ever! Indeed Revan was a skinflint even when she WAS the Dark Lord of the Sith. |
| Perturbation 2008-01-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, your Revan's changed... a lot. As is every character in the story. And yet they are the same characters within. It really makes me feel like a lot time has passed. Anyway welcome back Revan! "Don’t make me fry that egg, Mission!"-- This is as brilliant as ever. "A silence that was heavy with… more silence."-- Well, the new story makes makes me smile, but I do detect some sadness underneath. This is no crackfest like your older stories. Waiting to see more of it! |
| Ethereal Vesper 2008-01-06 ch 2, | abuseI really enjoyed that. I just finished the game, and was really upset that she really didn't play that big of a part in the second. Anyway, good job, and I'm looking forward to more. |
| xIgnoranceIsBlissx 2008-01-05 ch 2, | abuse-evil snicker- I do love the way you portray Revan. She's exactly what I would picture a cynical, newly returned Revan to be. |
| A Person Too Lazy To Log In 2008-01-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseYAY I do love a good Rev Returns fic! |
| Erudasi 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseReally great start, perked up my boring day. I especially loved this particular gem: “Don’t make me fry that egg, Mission!” Keep it up ;) |