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Fescuekid
2008-04-02
ch 3, anon.
abuseLovey-dovey. Check. Serious. Check. Angsty Revan. Check. Angsty Carth. Che-- oh wait. But it made me laugh anyway. So I forgive you. But seriously, there should be a warning on that thing. I went to bed all depressed and dreamt of bunnies committing suicide. M.. dead bunnies. But yeah.

Haha, Dustil and Mission, yay. I always wondered where Carth got off naming his kid Dustil. I personally always wished you could let him go off and be Darth Dustil, and have him show up in the sequel in black eyeliner.
Winter Arani
2008-01-15
ch 3,
abuseI really liked this. Hm... a drunk Revan. Look forward to more chapters.
general-joseph-dickson
2008-01-10
ch 3,
abuseGreat story.
xIgnoranceIsBlissx
2008-01-08
ch 3,
abuse-snort- leave it to Revan to finally see Carth again when she's piss drunk.
RandomCheese
2008-01-08
ch 3, anon.
abuseI LUV this story! You want to write more *wave of hand*
Uilleand
2008-01-08
ch 3,
abuse"Composing is neat. Decomposing isn’t"

Hah!!...I'm keepin' this one in my lexicon...

I like this chapter very much! It gives me a lot more of the serious Revan, underneath all the frivolity.
Ethereal Vesper
2008-01-08
ch 3,
abuseI really enjoyed that chapter. I wonder what Carth is going to thik when he finds a random gem in his hand when he wakes up. "But it was a dream" haha

Anyway good job.
Erudasi
2008-01-08
ch 3,
abuseDang it Revan! Why'd you have to go around being drunk? You and Carth, totally the cutest couple in history - get your act together!

*ahem*

Another good chapter, it's a little sad that Revan was able to convince Carth he was dreaming but eh, it's all good! People will believe whatever they want to believe - especially when they're desperate to believe it.

I love your portrayal of a drunken Revan, it's endearing. LOL, wonder what the Admiral will think in the morning when he wakes up with that stone and metal...
Lady Tragic
2008-01-07
ch 3,
abuseI want to review...

Hehehe. Thish ish all a dream, indeed. Can't wait to see how it turns out.
Perturbation
2008-01-06
ch 2, anon.
abuse"Aw, it landed butter-side down. That means you’ll have bad luck today."

"I’d be fairly confident that the ashes are actually those of your mother."

I was wrong. It's just the tiredness. Your Revan hasn't aged a day!! And she gouged Mission for that dress, oh, bad as ever! Indeed Revan was a skinflint even when she WAS the Dark Lord of the Sith.
Perturbation
2008-01-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow, your Revan's changed... a lot. As is every character in the story. And yet they are the same characters within. It really makes me feel like a lot time has passed. Anyway welcome back Revan!

"Don’t make me fry that egg, Mission!"-- This is as brilliant as ever. "A silence that was heavy with… more silence."-- Well, the new story makes makes me smile, but I do detect some sadness underneath. This is no crackfest like your older stories. Waiting to see more of it!
Ethereal Vesper
2008-01-06
ch 2,
abuseI really enjoyed that. I just finished the game, and was really upset that she really didn't play that big of a part in the second. Anyway, good job, and I'm looking forward to more.
xIgnoranceIsBlissx
2008-01-05
ch 2,
abuse-evil snicker- I do love the way you portray Revan. She's exactly what I would picture a cynical, newly returned Revan to be.
A Person Too Lazy To Log In
2008-01-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseYAY I do love a good Rev Returns fic!
Erudasi
2008-01-04
ch 1,
abuseReally great start, perked up my boring day. I especially loved this particular gem: “Don’t make me fry that egg, Mission!”

Keep it up ;)
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