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| talking2myself 2008-07-20 ch 29,  | abuseAs always, I loved the conclusion and you left me wanting more! It was such a good close... even if it was a bit of a cliffie! I especially like the dialogue between Barisian and Balian. It's rather touching! Can't wait for the next one! |
| fluffys-sidekick 2008-07-18 ch 29, | abusewow! what a story. i really had fun reading it. i will definitely be reading the next one. |
| Motif 2008-07-11 ch 29, | abuseFinally you finished another episode of this serie. I would waiting for Legacy of the Third Age. I quite too busy to give review after reading so I had to leave comment here that I love your imagination for the whole story. That's it. Sorry for my poor English because it's not my mother language, but you know that I love your stories, right? |
| Sonjadore 2008-07-11 ch 29, | abuseOh...WOW! That is the only thing I can think about right now! This was AMAZING! I highly enjoyed it, and I look forward to the sequel! |
| L. Byron 2008-07-11 ch 29, | abuseMagnificent end to the story. I hope we will not wait to long to read the new adventure of the perfect knight |
| Calathiel of Mirkwood 2008-07-11 ch 29, | abuse*happy sigh* There's more Turners!! :D Lovely ending! Too, too cute! I'll be excited to read the next one! Will it be appearing next Friday? |
| Ranchi Blade 2008-07-11 ch 29, anon. | abuseI did enjoy it, thanks ! and Im looking forward to read Chance Encounter: Legacy of the Third Age and nice trailer by the way |
| SwordMasterZ 2008-07-11 ch 29, | abuseOh no in trubel agen love the ending though |
| queenofspades19 2008-07-11 ch 29, | abuseawesome epilogue but why did balian need to go back to france and not stoy with his friends on middle earth? can't wait for the sequel, are there any knights and queens we should know about? |
| samurai89 2008-07-11 ch 29, | abuseThat was a great epilogue, im looking forward to the sequel! |
| milou8 2008-07-11 ch 29, | abuseNice way to end the story! Is the rest of the gang going to end up there as well or will they arrive in different places like in this story? Can't wait for next weekend! |
| PirateAngel1286 2008-07-11 ch 29, | abuseExcellent job with the fic. Can't wait till you start the next one. Happy writing. |
| Calenlass Greenleaf1 2008-07-11 ch 29, | abuseFav part: //The newest member of the Turner family was christened Jane Margaret Turner, after her two grandmothers. Willie was rather disappointed in his baby sister. The only thing she did was sleep, eat, cry, wet the bed, and generally take up his parents’ attention. “Now, now, be a good man,” said Barbossa. “She’ll grow up to be just as lovely as yer mother.” “She don’t look nothin’ like Mama,” said Willie. “She’s little and wrinkly and red, and she doesn’t have much hair. Anyway, her hair’s brown, like Papa’s and mine.” “Well, she be Will Turner’s daughter,” said Barbossa. Little Jane Turner had an abnormal number of surrogate uncles and aunts who doted on her. Balian and Will had built her cot, and Legolas sang her songs while Paris tried reading poetry to her. He swore that she understood him; Helen told him that he would be better off reading poetry to Jack the monkey instead. Cassandra and Bahram sent gifts all the way from Harad, including little silk outfits which would be wasted on a baby who often regurgitated milk. Anna-Maria helped Elizabeth to look after Little Jane, and Elizabeth once caught Jack making faces at her baby to try and make the tiny Turner laugh. Barbossa was looking forward to the day when he would be able to teach Jane Turner the tricks of his trade. Surely, with two such spectacular pirates for parents, the girl would turn out to be a pirate herself. After all, Willie was already accomplished in the art of piracy, and even the two younger boys, Barisian and Astyanax, were starting to learn. Of course, with Barbossa teaching them, how could they not learn?// :D Lovely epilogue. Looking forward to the next installment. :) ~Cal |
| vampfan30 2008-07-11 ch 29, | abuseamazing, as usual...Jack making faces at a baby, hm, don't think I'm surprised by it ^_^ can't wait for the next thing ! V |
| meldawen 2008-07-11 ch 29, | abuseI just loved this ending! Somehow, I find it quite amusing to imagine Jack making faces to make little Jane laugh. I'm realy looking forward to reading the fourth of the chance encounter series. Meldawen |