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Reiko x 3
2008-11-02 . chapter 9
Finally I have control back... *ahem* I am intrigued by the path this fic is taking. But there's one thing that's confusing me... /How/ are Vaclav and the rest /alive/? I could have sworn they were dead when I played through that part... Did something...resurrect them...or were they really never dead to begin with... So confused...

Dark: Yeah sure whatever. /I/ want to know wnen you're going to get to the good part!

*worried* The...good part...?

Dark: *evil laugh* More torture! More blood! I can NEVER get enough of that! I do so love seeing my favorite characters in pain... I get to see them at their best... *happy sigh*

...You are one sick, twisted little woman...

Dark: I'm your dark side. Everything negative within your psyche comprises my being. It's just my nature. Besides.../I/ am a part of /your/ mind, so I wonder...which of is /really/ the twisted one.

...Nope. It's still you.

Dark: Finally over your guilt complex then?

...Not exactly...I'm just too sleepy to feel guilty at the moment... Wait till tommorrow. It'll probably hit me after I wake up...

Dark: *blinking* Oh... Joy... I get to be woken up by your pathetic moaning... Lovely... I /really/ wish you'd get over that you know.

...Meh. I need sleep...

Dark: *glares at me*...I hate you sometimes.

I know. Well, we're eagerly awaiting the next update. Ja ne!

Dark: *growls* Ja matta ne...
yaoigirl 0159
2008-08-12 . chapter 9
Very nice! I still hate cliffhanger though...cant wait for the next chapter...have you thought about senel and jay kissing yet or im i just dreaming...you can talk to me on my DeviantArt account...im bluewolf1207...i think you commented on one of my senel pictures that i posted...anyway talk to you later.
yaoigirl 0159
2008-08-08 . chapter 8
O! I hate cliffhangers! You have to update soon so I can see where this story is going...i hope it ends up with senel and jay making out...I love the story by the way.
Sleic
2008-05-29 . chapter 8
I'm not sure where this fic is going, so update so I can figure it out !! n.n
zen
2008-05-02 . chapter 7
that was very suspence full and i cant wait to read the next chapter
Hikari Teiruzu
2008-03-29 . chapter 7
Homework is so evil at times. Well im glad u updated
zen
2008-01-29 . chapter 5
wow great come back its obviouse that you were the one dropped on their head you freak

o and i thought chapter 5 was good but whats with vaclav having purple hair?
Hikari Teiruzu
2008-01-29 . chapter 5
*k u Vaclav! I still hate you! -grabs dagger and chases Vaclav around-
DIE!
angelic'O'wings
2008-01-29 . chapter 1
XD
zen
2008-01-22 . chapter 2
that chapter was much better in my opinion and that was hilarious at the end when you hit senel with a book
zen
2008-01-21 . chapter 1
i think that was a good start for a first chapter i mean it wasnt to exciting but it didnt bore me to death either so it was kinda a good inbetween
Sleic
2008-01-20 . chapter 3
I suport you! great fic, looking forward to more
Jay So Cool
2008-01-17 . chapter 4
Nice job! Two Thumbs up yo. YOU keep this up girlfriend. Oh by the way Senel is MINE!
Jay So Cool
2008-01-15 . chapter 3
Dude that was ok. Why did Mattews mom have to die. What is the deal with you lovin Senel.
Jay So Cool
2008-01-15 . chapter 1
Very fasinating. What's the deal with you loving Senel.
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