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| Enigmatic Lotus Leaf 2008-04-09 ch 24, | abuseJohn is such an amazing man...FINALLY! That date was so much better than the first one, so much better. John and Nikki really have a good thing going and I really hope it works out. They are just so good for each other...and the fact that Michelle didn't introduce her because she was intimidated...that should have been the hint. What can I say... Randy is a different one. This thing between him and Aaron is really getting good. And Bea is stuck inthe middle...like the prize or something. Aaron is right though...actions do speak louder than words...great update! Update again soon please! |
| Inday 2008-04-09 ch 24, | abuseAy gusko ang lalake...lol:P parang todo todo mag away si Randy @ Aaron kay Bea bakit hindi mag sabihin si Bea ang totoo mahal siya kay Randy kung gusto mag tigilan ang away nila...Only if Gabby could bring the two closer than they could be together ^_^ |
| techwiz 2008-04-08 ch 24, | abuseAWESOME CHAPTER! I seriously cannot get enough of this fic! GO AARON!..hey Randy can your tiny lil brain process what Aaron said??..WORK HARDER DOOFUS! Bea AIN'T gonna fall into your arms so easily! got that?? Yeah Aaron rocks..wonder what is gonna happen now..! and yeah Randy is a serious jerk for flirting with the other model..idiot! Nikki and John are seriously very adorable! Their conversations crack me up!...she wants to do IT in the park..but yeah it is JC..lol! SUPER COOL CHAPTER! UPDATE SOON! |
| 101mizzpoet101 2008-04-04 ch 23, | abuse:“I’ll go with you,” Randy offered Bea looked at Aaron then at Randy. “Um, sure, but you could just stay here and rest.” She suggested “True, but I’ll have more time to rest. Plus I’ll get to spend more time with you,” Randy replied glancing over at Aaron and giving him that cocky ** smirk “So babe, how about I wash the dishes and you know you repay me later on in the bedroom?” Aaron asked with a smirk on his face Bea giggled and blushed. Randy scowled at Aaron. The nerve of that guy. Randy use to say that to Bea as a joke. But this time it could be a joke or not. They were all adults and Randy was sure they were both sexually active. Then he remembered the tattoo Bea has on her body. “So man, did you go with Bea when she got those tats?” Randy asked Aaron turned to Randy and it was now his turn to scowl at him. Aaron hated the fact Bea got Randy’s initials tattooed on her body. He hated seeing it, but that just showed him how she would always belong to Randy. Aaron smirked. “Yea, and? Did you see my name tatted on her **?” Aaron asked before getting his and Randy’s dishes and walking in the kitchen. Aaron left Randy with a shocked face and Bea with an amused face. She couldn’t believe Aaron just said that. She knew what games the two were playing. Possession over Beatrice game. This wasn’t the first time it occurred so in a way Beatrice was used to it. Both were trying to get the other jealous. Just gotta love men’s friendly competition." lmfao sparring match! how lovely! update soon please? i am excited to see this ** match between aaron and randy continue! |
| Enigmatic Lotus Leaf 2008-04-04 ch 23, | abuseLet the games begin...it's like a mini olympics competition between those two! And the prize is one Victoria's Secret model...boys will be boys. I'm glad Randy swallowed abit of his pride and is at least going after what he wants. And Nikki finally got her date! Thank you John for growing a pair and asking her out...she's already agreed to reproduce with him so the date should be no problem ;) They are good for each other...keep up the great work and update soon! |
| alana2awesome 2008-04-04 ch 23, | abuseooh this is getting good update soon. |
| techwiz 2008-04-04 ch 23, | abuseI think I'm your 100th reviewer..I want a virtual cookie for this! :D Aaron is right! Randy has to prove himself...he has to get Bea with a fight! Go Aaron! I love his character in the chapter “Yea, and? Did you see my name tatted on her **?” ..damn! that cracked me up! The constant bickering between those two is the best! Yes..Nikki and John are going on their date..NICE! It's good that Michelle and Nikki are best friends again and Damien is out of the picture! GREAT CHAPTER! I WANT TO KNOW HOW RKO GETS BEA! UPDATE SOOB!^_~!! |
| Inday 2008-04-04 ch 23, | abuseay naku! bakit hindi sinasabi si Randy kay Bea mahal siya?! 0_o Kung yata mag break up siya @ si Aaron...tigil ni Bea ang denial niya kay Randy ang kalokohan sa sarili niya at admit niya miss @ mahal ni Randy ^_^ |
| Inday 2008-04-01 ch 22, | abuseHope hindi too late si Randy kay Bea mag sabi mahal na mahal siya talaga! Alam nila mahal sila hindi si Sam o at kay Aaron kasi si Gabby,she's the one that brings their love together and makes it stronger ^_^ Bea is alot like Marimar when it comes to loving Sergio and she she knows how much she loves him no matter what,Even how many times they broke up and finally got together.Gabby alike Cruzita also brings them closer together alike Bea and Randy ^_^ |
| Enigmatic Lotus Leaf 2008-04-01 ch 22, | abuseAww...what a pleasant surprise! I would love to open my door and find Randy. Poor John, he's all alone and doesn't have a kid to play with. Glad Randy and Sam are over with, it was never meant to be. Now, if only we could take out Aaron. Hope Nikki has a good trip too! good work! I have been waiting for an update!! |
| 101mizzpoet101 2008-04-01 ch 22, | abuseFinally that ** spam is gone... i freakin' hate her with all of my heart and soul! i hate her with the fiery passion of a thousand burning suns! DIE ** DIE! okay now that i have that off my chest... i cannot believe you gave me a cliff hanger! after making me wait so long for an update you leave me with a cliffhanger?! and BTW this chapter seemed awfully short missy! you my dear friend are in trouble now! now i will growl at you gr arg >:-| |
| techwiz 2008-03-31 ch 22, | abuseOh yeah ! Now we are gettin' somewhere..YAY! Samn and Randy broke up ! It was really good that they ended it in friendly terms..trust me I didnt wanna see Sam as a bit(h in any more stories...great chapter! I had an inkling that it would be Randy before I read that he had come to Bea's place in the end..AND I WAS RIGHT!...AWESOME CHAPTER! U BETTER UPDATE SOON OR ELSE..*throwing threats*...THIS IS THE IMPORTANT TALK Y'KNOW! |
| miszallie 2008-03-24 ch 21, | abuseAwesome Chapter Once Again! To tell you the truth i could feel the pain Bea and Randy is going through. Okay, I just want to make a point here. If Sam wants to save her Relationship with Randy why don't she just Accept the fact that Bea is and always will be in Randy's Life? She's responsible for letting her relationship fall apart like that. |
| Inday 2008-03-23 ch 21, | abuseParang teleserye ang storya mo ^_^ Kinda reminds me of Marimar and Sergio Ay,bakit tigas ang ulo ni Bea?Alam niya hindi mahal si Aaron but basta sa puso at mata niya Mahal siya si Randy.Tapos niya ang denial niya parang alam niya sino ang totoong mahal niya. Kung Mahal siya si Randy bakit hindi sabihin kay Aaron mag break sila or see other people to see if they are compatible or hindi? awa ako kay Gabby :( parang tug of war mag laro ang dalawa sa kanya.Hindi alam sila masasaktan siya kasi away ang magulang niya? hope they can work things out for the sake of Gabby |
| Enigmatic Lotus Leaf 2008-03-23 ch 21, | abuseI agree with John. Sam needs to be out of the pic...let me at her! lol! Poor Gaby, I dont blame her for being mad at Sam, she is the reason Bea left. I see this week being reall hard for Bea just because she is away from her daughter. What is Nikki (me)thinking? Does she really think that by staying with Michelle that's not an open invitation for Damien to make his presence known? Seriously. And if John really is over Michelle, then he needs to prove it to Nikki because obviously he feels something for her. And I think that now that Damien can be put behind her...she needs to learn to love again, and I know just who can help her...;) Great update! Happy Easter! |