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max 5/30/03 . chapter 12
you know, i don't know why you put my corrections up as another chapter, considering it's the SAME THING.

YOU DID THIS ON PURPOSE!

agh, why do i even try?
gypsytollamer can't sign in 5/23/03 . chapter 12
This chapter seems awful farmiliar... Like it's the whole fic in one chapter with nothing new in it. Check it out! I think you updated the wrong file... But that's okay I still love you.-Gyps
max 2/17/03 . chapter 1
ai! who's alive around here?
max 1/7/03 . chapter 11
i'm glad other people decided to speak up considering i've been one of the few talking lately. but then, i am pretty spontaneous, everything has to happen quickly. i hate plans. i guess that's why everything get messed up, or helped, when i'm around
uh, bee? I was reallyreally bored one day, and i kinda got annoyed 'cause of all the punctuation(among others) mistakes. so, i copied the storie onto word and fixed it. so that made me ahppy, 'cause now i can read it without getting confused. and i wanted to know if you might want it. i mean, there's nothin' wrong with yours, but i was, as i said, i was reallyreally bored. another one o' those spontaneous things again.
let's see some action in this storie!

plus, i seem to recall you askin' fer ideas, and once i get put into somethin', or get interested, my minds starts to wander, so, as you've probably guessed, i got sum ideas. and, since i watched the matrix just last night, well, that brings up more wanderings...

and, so, if you wanted them, the ideas or storie fixings, you could email me, or somethin'...but, you don't have'ta, if you don't care. not that i think you uncaring! it's...just a suggestion.

so, everybody say, "yay!" i've had my first yoga lesson today, and bloody hell, was it hard! i just can't seem to breath.

plus, i almost had a heart attack 'cause i thought i lost my cross. but then i found it. and i then almost passed out in joy. *grins
i sound like i'm ranting again. i'll go now.

bye! (insert smiley)hell, this is bloody long...
Angel 1/5/03 . chapter 1
Hi!
Is it too late to enter? cause I'd like to if it is possible?

Heres a character I'd think you'd like,

Eye colour: Pink
Hair colour: white, with bright pink streaks short langth
Gender: neither *aham* they're a trasvestite also they're an albino

Internet name: Wire

Favorite clothes: none, they're apearance continualy changes

Favorite gw person: non good guy or a bad guy: definatly a bad guy

I'd really like to know if my character can get in or not, if it can't just email me. I really like your story, its very unually and great! I don't think I've come across anyone whose done this before.
juliemoonstar 1/5/03 . chapter 11
Great chapter. Yay. I kicked Heero's ass. lmao. Update soon. k. ja'ne.
Tro 1/5/03 . chapter 11
Good story there vari! weird but good
max 1/5/03 . chapter 11
dude! that's like exactly how i act, oh you're good. i crawl thru airvents! lots o fun.

i'm in the storie, happy day!

!

yes, it's very easy to make me happy.

you've just made my day.

um, gypsy, baaaaad gypsy. stay. away.

that woman is insane.

it would be a wonderful-good thing if i did not die. thankyou!

uh, i forgive you for implying things, since you asked me not to hurt you. now, kaetron on the other hand...

um, review. the storie's turnin out good, keep it up. but, it's kinda a little hard to understand who's sayin what and all that. but i can figure it out. keep up the updates!

see ya later!
Maxmillian 12/27/02 . chapter 10
GAAAAAAAHHHH!

when was the last time u updated?*sigh* Christmas is over, I have nothing to do, 'cept read stories. But the ones I wanna read are never there!*crosses arms* If u don't mind, if u ever write me in, could u please not kill me off? I mean, since u've only got, what? ten guys, and a bazillion girls? don't u need me?
please write me in, i'd be very appreciative.

just in case u have a sick sense of humor, i'm NOT gay, DON'T make me kiss Duo.
Shi-chan and Tsu would laugh at me.

uh, u want me to review? Well, gee, the girl with the pj's is wierd. Um, I feel sorry for duo's hair, and um, can i run the simulation? I can fight! i can fight! i'm not really sure what 'review' means.'tis a good storie, if u'd finish it. *grins*
The Wyld's Kyn 12/12/02 . chapter 10
This should be interesting so I am submiting

Eye colour:Changes with light

Hair colour:Silver with blue streaks
Internet name:Wild
favourite clothes:Black Jean cargo pants and lose green T-Shirt with a blue over Shir good guy or bad guy:Bad. Of course I could be good if you want.

Yes I, well my characture is male!

I don't care if you warp my Character.
yingfa 12/5/02 . chapter 9
:coughs:gags: gomen... :was sick, before that, was grounded off the internet, before THAT, her computer crashed, -_ newayz, i love it, i have the feeling i'm about to get killed or given some sort of corporal punishment demo ne :sweatdrops: hahaha! yeah... :is still delerious...aiiyah...
newayz, to be utterly serious... :glomps: thank you so much for actually incorporating me in...even if i am a sort of inept bad girl :sweatdrops: whatever, i love you and your story anyway, talk later-yingfa
sam linsday 11/23/02 . chapter 5
sorry, me 'gain.

figured whatcha ment.
remembered my net name's Maxmillian (Max fer short)
Sam Lindsay 11/23/02 . chapter 1
oi! guess this is fyi if u want it. by the way, i'm a guy, that should help.

eye colour: green, kind funny, but people say there's little yellow suns in them.

hair clour: brown

net name: sammi

fave clothes: green pants, orange shirt, black sunglasses, or just black anythin'.

fave GW person: duo

am i a good guy or bad guy: good guy.

okie, your storie's kewl and this is a really great idea. more people should have interactive stories. matrix rocks.
Dragon39 11/1/02 . chapter 1
Hey its me _ and here ya go...

Eye colour: Green

Hair colour: Dark Brown

Internet name: Dragon Kutusugawa

favouriteclothes: wateva suits my role you can dress me XD

Favourite gw person: Heero Yu good guy or bad guy: Dont mind
Elrohir 11/1/02 . chapter 1
Eye colour: Emerald green

Hair colour: Violet and black

Internet name: Elrohir Reynard

favourite clothes: Black trousers, white tank top, black boots.

Favourite gw person: Zech good guy or bad guy: Good
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