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Reviews For: Virmire Variations

Fescuekid
2008-04-19
ch 2, anon.
abuseHey, these were both pretty good, although I wonder if it's a little bit out of character for Shepard to be so unprofessional with Joker. As for Joker- spot on. Version 2 really rung home with me, because that's what I did my first playthrough, and I really DID feel like smashing her face through a wall. I wanted to rage at her, and she wouldn't even let me do that, never mind that she barely touched on Kaidan's death. Anyway, great piece.
magooglersriot
2008-02-13
ch 1,
abuseTheese were so awesome. I cant beleive that some people dont like ash that much, I mean your Commander is like super evil. Anyway you should some more stories!
RyWill
2008-01-25
ch 2, anon.
abuseWow! You really don`t like Ash, eh?

Bloody brilliant!
Ali
2008-01-04
ch 2, anon.
abuseOutstanding. Wonderfully well written; the characters were so defined. I think I love Joker even more after reading this. I didn't know that was possible.

Oh. And this:
“don’t fall for the Commander or she’ll drop a nuke on your head”
I lol'd.
PaChA mAmA
2008-01-04
ch 1,
abuse*applause*
Both chapters are amazing!!
Uilleand
2008-01-04
ch 2,
abuse*applause*

God, it really sticks with you, doesn't it??
As much as I hate the decision in chapter 2, I think I like Shep all the more after it.
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