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| Fescuekid 2008-04-19 ch 2, anon. | abuseHey, these were both pretty good, although I wonder if it's a little bit out of character for Shepard to be so unprofessional with Joker. As for Joker- spot on. Version 2 really rung home with me, because that's what I did my first playthrough, and I really DID feel like smashing her face through a wall. I wanted to rage at her, and she wouldn't even let me do that, never mind that she barely touched on Kaidan's death. Anyway, great piece. |
| magooglersriot 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abuseTheese were so awesome. I cant beleive that some people dont like ash that much, I mean your Commander is like super evil. Anyway you should some more stories! |
| RyWill 2008-01-25 ch 2, anon. | abuseWow! You really don`t like Ash, eh? Bloody brilliant! |
| Ali 2008-01-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseOutstanding. Wonderfully well written; the characters were so defined. I think I love Joker even more after reading this. I didn't know that was possible. Oh. And this: “don’t fall for the Commander or she’ll drop a nuke on your head” I lol'd. |
| PaChA mAmA 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuse*applause* Both chapters are amazing!! |
| Uilleand 2008-01-04 ch 2, | abuse*applause* God, it really sticks with you, doesn't it?? As much as I hate the decision in chapter 2, I think I like Shep all the more after it. |