Totally awesome. Very insightful and evocative. The start of a beautiful friendship that should have been there all along.

What cute Remus/Severus fluff! It made mw smile to see Severus helping him)

This was emotional, sweet, and sad. It's an issue that could very well come up and it would be nice for Severus and Sirius to be their for him. Glad this isn't becasue that just isn't my cup of tea. I like to read about nice close friendships and this was a good story even if it's short-ish, concidering it's a one-shot.

this was so good

i love how Sev was caring

write more mayber with S. Black, Remus, Sev and Luc as friends

I very much like your writing style. It's thorough and very believable. The only complaint that I have is that the story is so short. I wish there was more of it! Keep up the good work.

tHAT WAS FANTASTIC!