This is beautifully written and has such a poetic structure! I really enjoyed reading your story.

And, yes, Piandao needs more lovin' and young Pakku is the best.

This came from Deviantart, you say? Wow. That's interesting. I'll have to watch Sokka's master agian and think about it.

And yes, young Pakku is AWESOME.

Very nicely written. I love this ship as well. You are right...we need more Pianursa fics.

This is beautiful. Very lyrical and romantic.

I found this thanks to a meme also... and you know what? I absolutely loved it. This was definatly unexpected, and I'd have never thought of the ship, but your story makes it sound so plausable! I loved how it was all centered around flowers, and the waiting for them to bloom... really poetic, that.

Very lovely.

Wow. Great idea, well portrayed. Thanks for sharing.

I think you've just brought a new crackship to my attention that I'm not going to be able to resist. XD You wrote it so well.

Hm, interesting pairing. I like the story a lot.

FINALLY! AFTER WEEKS OF STALKING AND GOOGLE, I FIND AN URSANDAO FIC! WOO!

YOU WIN AT LIFE. Seriously. Just for writing such awesomeness about Piandao, you win the Internet and a batch of Piandao cookies.

My crackship is Piandao/Hakoda, but your Piandao/Ursa piece is beautifully done. I love the flower imagery and the reasoning behind his desertion. Piandao love ftw!

Thank you. This was a lovely piece. I agree, Pian Dao is an awesome character who deserves more attention! Pairing him with Ursa is a great crackship. So now, you need to write what happens next...

I thought this was a very eloquent look into this relationship. It was believable and very well written. Amazing job :)