 Kataru 2009-11-03 . chapter 3WAHWAhwawahwah howly fowking shet, another narusasu fanta legend in the making! O_o I lab it~
do continue please... lil'saucegay is so cute. |
 joanna 2009-08-13 . chapter 3 i really love this =[
please continue?? ino its been a while but please?? |
 roses-have-thorns911 2009-07-27 . chapter 3The story is good, but if you take too long to update, readers will forget what the story is even about. I'm going to favorite it because I really like the stpry and want to know what happens next, but I hope it doesn't take so long for the next update. Great chapter anyway! I love the whole story idea. So Sasuke and Naruto are brothers then right? It's too bad Sasuke forgot meeting Naruto, I wonder when their lives will cross again. I can't wait for the next chapter! :) |
 moopad 2009-06-30 . chapter 3Hahaha this story is so entertaining. Naruto's reaction was so funny, getting stutering and all that. THe kiss on the cheek was so sweet. It's interesting with what behind Sasuke's mom and Kyubi
pls continue
thanx |
 Ilamay 2009-06-29 . chapter 3I like it. But something is missing...I don't know what it is,hm... Thanks for writing it. :) |
 MeowMix 2009-06-28 . chapter 3 I love the plot of this story!
Can't wait for more
(:
Update soon pleasu |
 I'm-not-here-HONEST 2009-06-28 . chapter 3interesting, sounds good so far
update soon? |
 namineheart12 2009-06-27 . chapter 3Nice story can't wait for more please update soon |
 kyuubikittykat13 2009-06-27 . chapter 3Lol... it's good... If I could remember what was happening... I had to go back and read it!
Update soon pleaz? |
 lalala 2009-06-27 . chapter 3 Pretty interesting fic so far. You suprised me by making Sasuke the angel and Naruto the demon. I like your writing style. Watch your spelling though. In the first chapter, there as one typo that confused me for a bit. "Desprite" should be "Desperate".
Also, just wondering. If I'm giving a spoiler, delete this review or something. Kyuubi and Sasuke's mom (Mikoto? I don't remember you saying her name.) were lovers at one point, right? If that is the case, Naruto and Sasuke are brothers? That would explain Sasuke's slight evilness and Naruto's kindness. |
 Seibutsu Wa Yoru Desu 2009-06-10 . chapter 3Since I Uber Love This Story I Would Like To Be Your Beta But Since If You Decide To Let Me Edit Your Smexiness I'll Understand If You Want TO Fire Me Cause I Suck And This'll Be My !st Time Being a Beta
E-mail if interested- Cause the one i have on here sucks monkey nuts. |
 i-am-turk-fear-me 2009-02-27 . chapter 2aww so cute please coutuine ^_^ |
 Tsukishi 2008-11-14 . chapter 3^_^ totally awsome...i'll take u up on your offer if you want ^_^ |
 YaoiLover162 2008-09-29 . chapter 3Um, if you want I can be a beta for you. I'm good with grammar and spelling and that kind of stuff. I'm actually kind of OCD about it. And I can help you with ideas and stuff. If you want me to, just send me a message. Okay? |
 Moola Deena 2008-09-24 . chapter 3Can't you get a beta soon!? *desperate* I WOULD do it, but english isn't my first language so... that kind of defeats the purpose. *sweatdrop* Anyhow, (*squeals*) they've met! *dun dun dun* And I'm late for school... soon. In like ten minutes. So I gotta go. |