thats was a really interesting story !!

that was very cute story

Great story! I really enjoyed it

secrets better left untold was...AWSOME!!

Great cliff hanger!
Is Cielo Rita's real mother ?

I cannot stand Illusion that a**hole!

What is wrong with Edward!?!?!?!

It's done? No, that can't be true!? :(
Well, this story kinda took my breath away.
I loved it, how did you come up with this stuff?
It's amazing!

Chapter one: Heartbreaking. Need. More. Now.

aww!

I LIKED THIS STORY I THOUGHT IT WAS VERY CREATIVE I LOVED THE OPENING BUT I LOST INTEREST A BIT WHEN IT CAME TO THEM BEING ANGELS BUT I REGAINED THAT INTEREST NEAR THE END BUT I THOUGHT THE END WAS RUSHED X

I LOVE IT!

WOW THIS WAS AWSOME! I LOVED IT!

this is really good plz plz plz plz keep writing ^.^

Cool story! It was awesome! ^-^