This would be a much more interesting fic if you took out the choose yoru own ending thing... that ** ** me off. it ruins whgat would otherwise be a very interesting read.

oh my gosh, this is so cute! I love it! please take your time updating, but just please update it, pleaase...

Umm... Update? :-3

This seems pretty good so far.

Cute little story, I'd love to read more!

Interesting story you have so far. I love Choose Your Own Adventure stories...the unfortunate thing is that I read all the choices due to my curiosity. XD Shinigami love all around! Looking forward to the next few installments!

I love the format of this, where you choose a path. XD It's awesome. And I love how sweet this is so far. Poor Rem; she's just so popular with the guys isn't she?

Oh, this is MyNameIsSchmem from dA. :)

Great!