Lucius/Sirius that could be interesting
I liked your idea that Snape and Lucius are bickering who is Death Eater no 1
Voldemort wants nothing to do with me at the moment. I don’t know, but I think I’m slightly offended by that
I like your humour
Are there would be some Hermione/Snape ?

Snape were pining after his half-sister? Or in your story Snape were just feeling friendship towards Lily? Since he didn’t know that Lily is sister I think he could be still be in love with her.
I liked how you described Lily’s and James relationship I always found it funny when woman acts like head of family

Well it seems I found good story
Thank you for writing this fic

Ron- I really can believe that he betrays Harry’s friendship. He was at his brothers shadows at home and now at school he is cast at shadow because of his best friend. I can believe that jealously could drive Ron to hate Harry add that Harry is homosexual and Ron is homophobe. And there I began wonder why Ron is homophobe? Others Weasleys seems OK that Harry likes boys. Why Ron have another opinion than his family? Not that I think it’s not possible for example my cousin is homophobe but I’m not and we are one family.
Why Ginny hexed Draco’s hair? It was silly thing to do if she wanted to try to be civil to each other. I assume you put that for fun but I didn’t found that funny

Ron- I really can believe that he betrays Harry’s friendship. He was at his brothers shadows at home and now at school he is cast at shadow because of his best friend. I can believe that jealously could drive Ron to hate Harry add that Harry is homosexual and Ron is homophobe. And there I began wonder why Ron is homophobe? Others Weasleys seems OK that Harry likes boys. Why Ron have another opinion than his family? Not that I think it’s not possible for example my cousin is homophobe but I’m not and we are one family.
Why Ginny hexed Draco’s hair? It was silly thing to do if she wanted to try to be civil to each other. I assume you put that for fun but I didn’t found that funny

wow! i loved this story! it was freakin awesome lol i spent 4 days reading it! now onto the sequel...

I hope it isn’t another horribly abused Harry fic without point and without consequences to his mental health. I have found a lot of this kinda fic and only FEW fic with abused Harry were really well written.
Also I am discouraged by the way how Draco acts I am not fan of nice Draco however I am willing to read next chapters and decide what I think about this fic

NO! how could you do that?!! **sobs** you, you you big bully!

OMG!! draco was soo funny. I cant wait to read the rest of the story..and so many reviews you have!! i personally like dracoxharry, draco being the seme, and harry is the uke..not the other way around. anyway, even though i read the first two chapters, i am in love already. your such a great author(ess)!

On chapter 11 so far and no intention of stopping reading...just a suggestion from someone who is enjoying your story...have you thought of reposting it and correcting all the spelling errors? There are quite a few of them and while some people might not care or even notice, I can assure you that there are those it would definitely bother.

Well no matter, once I have downloaded a copy I will fix them myself for my copy. Hope to have this first part read today and start on the sequel tomorrow...or maybe stay up really late and read it all today.

BRILIANT STORY!

OMG! I loved this story soo much! The animagus forms were awesome but they also had another transformation, the Ukatao, which blew my mind away! awesomely written and constructed and everything!! *adds everything to favourites* Keep up the good work!! =D

thanx for the laughs and smiles you put in the story and the occanical sorrow to remind others to enjoy what they got...c

Im a little disappointed in Draco, allowing Mione to attack and causing bloodshed (a little) from Harry. Isn't he suppose to protect Harry. Then Harry apologizes that is so wrong

But it’s a mute point now, isn’t it?”
tom riddle said this but I just wanted to let you know that the expression is actually moot point not mute.
I keep rereaing this story i just love it so much!