NO! how could you do that?!! **sobs** you, you you big bully!

OMG!! draco was soo funny. I cant wait to read the rest of the story..and so many reviews you have!! i personally like dracoxharry, draco being the seme, and harry is the uke..not the other way around. anyway, even though i read the first two chapters, i am in love already. your such a great author(ess)!

On chapter 11 so far and no intention of stopping reading...just a suggestion from someone who is enjoying your story...have you thought of reposting it and correcting all the spelling errors? There are quite a few of them and while some people might not care or even notice, I can assure you that there are those it would definitely bother.

Well no matter, once I have downloaded a copy I will fix them myself for my copy. Hope to have this first part read today and start on the sequel tomorrow...or maybe stay up really late and read it all today.

BRILIANT STORY!

OMG! I loved this story soo much! The animagus forms were awesome but they also had another transformation, the Ukatao, which blew my mind away! awesomely written and constructed and everything!! *adds everything to favourites* Keep up the good work!! =D

thanx for the laughs and smiles you put in the story and the occanical sorrow to remind others to enjoy what they got...c

Im a little disappointed in Draco, allowing Mione to attack and causing bloodshed (a little) from Harry. Isn't he suppose to protect Harry. Then Harry apologizes that is so wrong

But it’s a mute point now, isn’t it?”
tom riddle said this but I just wanted to let you know that the expression is actually moot point not mute.
I keep rereaing this story i just love it so much!

I wonder what I would have done to the person who insulted my friend (whist I had dark creature powers that is)? I probably would have pushed his ears up his nose and pull them through his eyes...Hm...or...I could tie them down and use a hammer to slowly pound their teeth into their gum's. O now that sounds fitting...but only because I don't have super magical creature powers. I imagine I would be more creative if I did. *smiles wickedly* No one EVER messes with my friends.

I know, I know...you can't believe I'm reading your story...again! lol But I really do love it. It reminds me of family and what its suppose to mean. It lifts my heart and makes me smile. Reminds me of my adoptive sister. And brother bear. And mama and papa. lol I just really love reading this. It comforts me to a degree that I can't explain and I want to thank you again for writing it. *Hugles* lol thanks :)

Great story.
Moving on to the sequel. I normally shy away from the main characters being bad. But you got me on This one. I'm loving it. I hope to see Ron either get over himself or go REALLY bad!

WOW!! I'm so into this story! Thanks for being so creative. Can't wait for Capter 12!

You have an incredible sense of story! What an engrossing saga you've created. The OC's are just as interesting as the main characters. Will Duds end up with Neville? How about Tom and Luna? I could see Dumbles working with the enemy thinking they would give him the edge over Tom's forces, but Harry is more with it then me, or is it that the author just knows her 'verse better than her reader? On to the sequel!

Nice! I'm loving this story. I can't wait to see what happens!!

There are a lot of original ideas here which I like ..
But in turn there are equally as many cliche HP-DM themes >: ..that got old so long ago.

The character development and dialogues could be a bit better. Real people aren't as black and white as you've made your characters out to be. Ron and Dumbledoore = 100% bad. Everyone else = super good. There needs to be a grey area in order for things to flow smoothly. Additionally, the dialogues come off as a one man show. What i'm trying to get at is...that the characters all sound a like. They all use the same slang..and have the same sort of humor. It's important for each person to have their own voice, or at the very least the main characters should be able to have something that one can identify as belonging solely to them. I think after you type each dialogue you should ask yourself : What personality traits of said character would make him say this? If you can't come up with a reasonable answer , then your dialogue could probably use some working.

I also think the Emo=Harry thing is a bit annoying. The emo is just too thick here for the audience to have any sort of sympathy for him. If you added the depressing material in small concentrated portions, it would be more effective. But as of now..there's so much of it that it's just...common place.

There are also quite a few errors such a using then when you should have used than. Not using the correct two/too/to. Subject verb disagreement...and so on. But they weren't really a problem..just something that readers notice and say "oh.."
You should consider getting beta-readers to proof read for you.

Otherwise, good luck with future writing