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| BULMA16 2008-03-18 ch 1,  | abuseI love, love, love this story. It's definitely one of the best Urayoru's out there. |
| GypsyOfLior 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abuseIts brilliant. Amazing. A little bit flaky but its still genius. And Its so beautiful to. Talent like this could take someone far, and youve got it. |
| Conterra-san 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseYoruichi is def. one of my favorite characters. great portrayl. (god i wish i could spell) ~C |
| SsAnImE 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseI must congratulate you on how well in character you kept both Yoruichi-san and Kisuke-san. A very nice and easy going fic. Nice job! |
| Dakyu 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseWow. This was a truly powerful piece. I'm really genuinely surprised at how well you portrayed Youruichi and Urahara, to be honest. They're amazingly difficult characters to write about, and you nailed both of their personalities perfectly (especially with the Kisuke skipping in after becoming captain... that was classic ^^) Great work with this one! Kudos! Dak |