::face palm:: Agh! guys...
tis was good. ^_^

figures ne figures so much hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

Cute.

Nice one! I like it a lot. Heh...it'd be really interesting baby-sitting for those four...and if you added in Hiyori's and Shinji's *shudder* hahaha

thanks for the good read!

i wasm reading backwards, and apparently already reviewed 2 but it made me cry-- probably again lol.

and i love this one too. about colors and woowowow. i just really like your ideas.

fantastic

~C

i would be so weirded out as ichigo if my oldest son kind of didn;t really like me and was named Kaien. . .hm.

good portrait of the family. i really liked it, it was short and sweet and decriptive and touching.

well done!

~C

aw that was so cute! i loved your great writing style as well! kekeek! i like that pairing of Hiyori and Shinji! nice! keep up the good work!

an 8 year old with an inner hollow ne...interesting ne.

Preety dang good! (sorry for the texan drawl rite there) Nice writin' skizilz! ;3

AWESOME

i was going to be like "oh, the kuchiki family. oh, byakuya." but you fixed what i wanted to you to fix all nicely towards the bottom when you were like: and then byakuya decided to become a person because of ichigo and we're a family and renji came back because of ichigo. . .and basically everything is becasue of ichigo :-P

~C

All I can think about for this chapter is "Aw."

And coming from a guy, I'm not sure if that's disturbing or encouraging that you made me do that... but whatever, I liked both chapters thus far, hehe.

Nice job ^^

Dak

aw... so beautiful, the writing and the idea.

You really captured Rukia's intricate complexities and transformed it into something so touching.

Fluff would be nice, but keep writing!

Wow, that was really good! Great!

I love the title and the theme of a colorless world, Rukia's blank canvas that Ichigo painted.. lol. You did a great job of extending an idea with the depth of your writing.

It's hard to give a review for something so damned... good. I don't like how sparse the dialogue in your writing is, but that's really nothing to complain about when it's put up against such an excellent piece.