i loved the story! cant wait for the next one but i really didnt like breaking dawn. i got about halfway through it and couldnt finish it and thats not like me to do. :( love your work though :) keep going :)

wow i love it! very well written, most limes like this are kinda hard to write but you made it very nice. i love your choice of words too :)

So sweet - loved all the chapters of build up to the hot stuff! Great writing - it sounded like Bella and Edward.

A Very long but worthwhile story that flowed and intertwined around Bella and Edward. It is such a breath of fresh air to see the everyday activities of Bella and the Cullens, and the way they interate between each other. I felt that Bella had more to her than what is described in the Twilight series and I thank you for the entertainment. Thank you very much.

Great story, just read it from start to finish and I absolutely adored it!

Izzy x

Lol love the story - just figured out that all the chapters are songs - nice touch

i so loved this story

What a Lovely story, Thank You

Haha, i love how you think 29 degrees Celsius / 85 Fahrenheit is a heatwave. I live in Australia and that would be a mild day, hell Tuesday was 40 degrees celsius

What a great story! I'll admit, I was getting VERY anxious for Edward and Bella to become intimate, and wow, it was worth the wait. Wonderfully done lemon, fit perfectly with the story. I'll be reading more of your stories! Thank you!

The most amazing story I have read! I can't even explain how this story has affected me. Brilliant! You should write a story of your're own. It would be epic. Please never believe anyone who ever says anything bad about your writing, it's intelligent and compelling. I'm off to read the other stuff you have written.

If I have said it once I have said it a thousand times, A-freaking-mazing!

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Yay! I'm so glad Edward stood up to Charlie.

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So cute! I'm impressed. Your a great writer, and I love how you don't keep everthing completely perfect all the time.

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Omg. Really. This chapter was hilarious. Actual laugh out loud. I can't wait to read the next chapter. You are a very talented writer!

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DAYUM! that was INTENSE! but why did u make bella pass out? i was getting more and more excited by the second! amazing! i loved it, very good!