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| imgonnadie 2008-08-17 ch 6,  | abuseExcellent story. Do you plan on writting a sequel? |
| Meca Vegeta 2008-06-30 ch 6, | abusethere gonna be like a second part to this or is this the whole story? |
| Dirt Rider 712 2008-06-09 ch 6, | abuseAWSOME! I was getting a bit worried there for a minute, when the tasks were rushed, but the ending tied it all togather nicely! Really, I liked how they killed Voldemort, and how they got together. This story could be even better if you re-wrote it as a full lenght 30 or so chapter long story. An epilog would be great! Once again, GREAT STORY!¡!¡!¡!¡! Dirt Rider |
| Lyra the Sorceress of Schol... 2008-06-08 ch 6, | abuseWhat a very odd concept... Thoroughly enjoyable story - good job. ^^ Though I will have to reiterate that it's odd. Ah well. |
| Ie-maru 2008-06-08 ch 6, | abuseNICE! I like it, definitely. If you do write an epilogue, it would be very interesting. |
| apathetica 2008-06-02 ch 4, | abusem horcrux... so creamy! |
| SomeGuyFawkes 2008-05-26 ch 6, | abuseAck, this turned into somewhat of an Anne Rice crossover! Still, it was a spanking good story despite the appalling lack of deaths of: Snivelus, Dumbles, all canon Death Eaters (especially all three Malfoys), assorted ministry scum, and a Weasley or two. |
| SomeGuyFawkes 2008-05-26 ch 4, | abuseSorry to hear that this chapter almost didn't get posted. Sure it has a few typos but it also has at least five laugh-out-loud moments. Your first drafts appear to be better than 85 percent of other fanfic-ster's "polished" prose. |
| SomeGuyFawkes 2008-05-26 ch 3, | abuseAnother great chapter, thanks. "It’d taken him almost an hour to convince her not to summon Draco instead" -- WHY? ;-) An innocent slip of the tongue and everybody's happy (unless Draco's taste matches his soul). It's a shame that Harriet can't forgive Ron and Hermione (only the one time, no third chances) but it is understandable in this character. |
| SomeGuyFawkes 2008-05-26 ch 2, | abuseFabulous chapter, thanks! |
| SomeGuyFawkes 2008-05-26 ch 1, | abuseHey, if you can't love yourself, who can? ;-) Excellent story start! This story also parallels Nonjon's excellent "Dimension Hopping" tales. Your plot has a fatal flaw. Now that Harriet has been AK'd, she will show up in "King's Cross", per canon. Also per canon, Dumbledore will be there. Dumbles will obviously then know that someone is mucking with his evil schemes. |
| jacee2u 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuse>A warning in advance: This story does explore a fairly odd >Harry/Harriet ship which means there are some aspects of >ephebophilia and incest involved (though from a certain >perspective, they’re not). And, from a completely different point of view, it could be considered as mast... er, not sure I can write that on . Anyhow, it's an interesting start, and I look forward to seeing where it goes. JaCee |
| Sdarian 2008-05-12 ch 6, | abuseThis was pretty good. I could wish that it was longer, but what can you do... Anyway, good job. |
| Artendome 2008-05-09 ch 6, | abuseWow you need to stop underestimating yourself it was awesome in my opinion. |
| carmsfic 2008-05-08 ch 6, | abuseGreat story. The Percy twist was definitely unexpected but overall great job! |