aw...thats all i realy have to say XD ,lol cute ^^v

Aww, cute-ish^^

It's beautiful. You're really a great writer, my friend. I could really feel everything your characters were feeling, and the ending was lovely. I hope you'll do something like this again, it will most surely be worth the reading :)

AW! THE ENDING WAS SO CUTE!

aw... that was so cute! but just to let you know XD you spelled "lose" wrong =P "loose" is like when something is not tight. hehe but that's okay it was so sweet and adorable =D

Aw, that was such short and sweet story! And, yeah, what both Loki and Mayura have is a definition of LOVE.

Good job!

Cute. Although too short for any other impressions, your writing was well thought out and easy to read. It was a great characterization.