I love your use of language. And sometimes, when the words run together it's just amazing how it seems to work.

The whole thing sort of reminded me of poetry. I love it.

*Snort giggle* There is no such thing a personal space with Kaworu around. xD

(And I hope they don't fix his gay in REBUILD. We need his nice-n-happy-gay to balance out Shinji's emo.)

Reading hurt/comfort fics make me want to cry. He needs a hug.

STOP.

REWIND.

*Re-reads several times*

Who said "I love you."? Was it Kaworu? Was it Shinji? YOU ARE PLAYING MIND TRICKS. D= ;~;

Oh look, a second chapter. *Dashing off to read it before she is eaten by confusion and LOUD WORDS WHY*

You have wonderful imagery. You expressed a lot in few words, and that's talent. Good job.

P.S. - Lucky Star = good times. LOL

Wow. This is some chapter!

Shinji: I OWN J00

Wow I loved this!

How you managed to get this from "breath play" is only a testament to how totally cool you are.

Yah, I didn't really know what I expected, but I'm 100 percent sure you surpassed whatever my mind could conjure. That was just... awesome.

I've never viewed Kaworu as someone desperate. You know, in the canon fics, that he has to die, but in the anime it seems he's come to peace with it. Here, I thought that he didn't want to accept he was going to leave Shinji, but was going to wring Shinji for every bit of humanity anyway. Did that make sense?

And Shinji trying to kill him... Priceless! It was so well written I didn't even think of when he tried to kill Asuka. And my heart was pounding so quickly! I thought: No, Shinji, stop. Please stop. You CAN'T kill Kaworu, he's your pimp daddy!!

And where would anyone be without thur pimp daddy?

Gawd, this drabble is making me ramble. Just know, I throughly enjoyed it. And you ROCK.

Whoa! Intense!

Me again XD I Just want you to know I drew a picture inspired by your story which you can view here http://yuumei.deviantart. com/art/It-s-Not-Love-73993397 (without the space between the . and the com) I hope you don't mind.

I love the twisted intensity of this piece. Well done!

this was absolutely gorgeous, i could feel everything between these two; how tense, how strained. pls write more.

Wow that was so beautiful and depressing! I love it! Please write more! *begs*