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Bells of Tomorrow 2008-02-14 ch 2,	abuseYou have wonderful imagery. You expressed a lot in few words, and that's talent. Good job. P.S. - Lucky Star = good times. LOL
Rose1948 2008-02-11 ch 2,	abuseWow. This is some chapter!
Paradox Man 2008-02-09 ch 1,	abuseShinji: I OWN J00
rei yamata 2008-02-01 ch 1,	abuseWow I loved this!
Yukari Youkai 2008-01-10 ch 1,	abuseHow you managed to get this from "breath play" is only a testament to how totally cool you are. Yah, I didn't really know what I expected, but I'm 100 percent sure you surpassed whatever my mind could conjure. That was just... awesome. I've never viewed Kaworu as someone desperate. You know, in the canon fics, that he has to die, but in the anime it seems he's come to peace with it. Here, I thought that he didn't want to accept he was going to leave Shinji, but was going to wring Shinji for every bit of humanity anyway. Did that make sense? And Shinji trying to kill him... Priceless! It was so well written I didn't even think of when he tried to kill Asuka. And my heart was pounding so quickly! I thought: No, Shinji, stop. Please stop. You CAN'T kill Kaworu, he's your pimp daddy!! And where would anyone be without thur pimp daddy? Gawd, this drabble is making me ramble. Just know, I throughly enjoyed it. And you ROCK.
Rose1948 2008-01-06 ch 1,	abuseWhoa! Intense!
Yuumei 2008-01-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseMe again XD I Just want you to know I drew a picture inspired by your story which you can view here http://yuumei.deviantart. com/art/It-s-Not-Love-73993397 (without the space between the . and the com) I hope you don't mind.
Bells of Tomorrow 2008-01-06 ch 1,	abuseI love the twisted intensity of this piece. Well done!
Ibis 2008-01-06 ch 1, anon.	abusethis was absolutely gorgeous, i could feel everything between these two; how tense, how strained. pls write more.
Yuumei 2008-01-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow that was so beautiful and depressing! I love it! Please write more! begs

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