wow this is awesome i love the entire thing great writing, mood, the story has it's own sort of realm that it put's you in as you read it. great stuff

*glomps* You brought her back!!

Oh. T_T It started out so full of deep sadness and transformed into such a beautiful happy ending it made me tear up! You are truly an awesome writer, my dear! I love the other spirits in the Lifestream aiding Cloud- beautiful imagery!

oh. I liked this a lot. Very deep. I liked how Zack and the others gave him strength at the end. =)
Cloud/Aerith rules! And so does Final Fantasy VII!

Wow... that was a bit long, but it spells out your love for these two characters. I love how everything is metaphorical, and though Cloud seems surprisingly mature here, the interaction is really nicely done. I don't think many people are capable of pulling off such a story. And, the ending! Aw. That made me smile~ Keep at it!
Peace,
-winter

Wow, this is really good. I raised my eyebrows when I read your summary, saying this is one of the best pieces you wrote, since it sounded...kinda...um...over-confident, but this is really, really good. It's sweet and realistic. I really liked it.