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| Hidanluv XD 2008-09-12 ch 8, | abuse>.< when are you gonna put Kakuzu's chapter up!? they're all really good and ill be waiting for the last one.. -Akari |
| imanokie01 2008-08-23 ch 9, | abuseThat was great. Hidan's gonna get raped. LMAO. :) |
| Tsukiyomaru 2008-08-18 ch 9, | abuseWell I'm a big fan of Bleach so i'll still read your stories if there funny enough. This one was really funny and hasd me chuckling the whole time. You probably plan on it, but Kakuzu's should be "I am NOT Frankenstein!" |
| Solosan 2008-08-10 ch 9, | abuse“Though I won’t hesitate to shove my pike up your tight ass! ...Come again? Oh lol the irony~ Your sens of humour has me grinning my head of you know? Although Shikamaru is (big time) oc. Not that it matters I guess but hey it's interesting how something like that can bug me. Sorry. Oh well be a major fangirl I'm gonna go search up some Shika hidan~ |
| Shai-san 2008-08-09 ch 9, | abuseAnd I thought Tobi was lying through his teeth. It really bites when Kishimoto kills someone off just when I start to like them. |
| Hidanluv XD 2008-08-09 ch 9, | abuse>.< i lov it! i cant wait until Kakuzu's part comes out^-^ oh and Hidan is so that kinky, lolz... -Akari |
| 07Merc-kun 2008-08-08 ch 9, | abuseThe only thing I could think about while reading this- was that someone in the audience should of said: "This is about everything you're not, not everything you are." Then..I don't know I laugh. |
| kir-chan the ferret-zodiac 2008-08-04 ch 9, | abuseoh i cant wait to hear what kakuzu has to say... >:3 |
| Grievous daydreamer 2008-08-04 ch 9, | abuseLol, yay! Wow, how do you think of all those things? (besides from some of the shadier fics here) And I didn't see any mistakes; grammar and spellings are fine. :) |
| Earthsoftenstheflame 2008-08-04 ch 4, | abuseDon't worry Kisame there are other beaches along the sea ^^ Keep up the great work! |
| Earthsoftenstheflame 2008-08-04 ch 3, | abuselol, haha we belive you Itachi...not XD Keep up the great work this is awesome! |
| Domini-chan 2008-08-03 ch 9, | abuseKakuzu's evil. Simly and plainly evil. |
| Domini-chan 2008-08-03 ch 8, | abuseSHINO IS NOT EMO! ... Okay, maybe he is a bit. ... Whatever. HOW DARE THEY NOT SAVE TOBI? Come on! Is he Zetsu's seme and Deidara's uke or something? |
| Domini-chan 2008-08-03 ch 7, | abuseHe likes Tobi and raped the poor boy? Kul... Hehehe. Funny. |
| Domini-chan 2008-08-03 ch 6, | abuseWow, that sounds wrong. I mean, sex with himself? Creepy... In a funny way! |