I usually don't like fics where an original character (let alone two) plays a large part of the story. This is an exception, as, basically, the joke's on them. They're also not annoying.

It's more of a fic-verse Azula here, although she works too, and several of her more interesting quirks do show here. Would be fun to see if you could write any other fics about her.

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! This is hilarious! I love it.

Kaixo! My god! This is funny! Your story is so well adapted on Azula’s ‘special’ kind of date. Those guys are really crazy! If they weren’t suicidal, maybe just a bit extreme, who says they didn’t love adrenaline on their dates? Hahaha! Seriously, your idea is a great one, and the way the story has been developing. Wow! Fantastic! Azula completely on character. The eccentric princess found a guy for her… wha! I just… I just love it! Update! Update!

i love it!

so funny can't wait to see how azula found out lol

plzplzplzplzplzplz UPDATE!

:P

Yay! not the end!

This is getting better - not too dark this time. You really show how smart Chou can be, what with the fireflies and all.

Questions:

1. Why the "?" before every second sentence? (I know I'm exaggerating, but still)

2. How'd Azula find out?

Another great chapter. :) I'm really curious to see what direction you take the story in, now that the date's over. Please update soon. Thanks. :)

Wow! So funny! I actually wasn't expecting Chou to survive the date...but good job! I can't wait to read the rest of the story!

Blackdragon
aka Nala-chan

wow. that was soo funny1

It's nice to see that suki has a friend, or at least someone to talk to. It is true that even in the worst of times as long as you have someone else to complain to (even if there not a friend) you can usulay get through it. On a side point however, I realy find it hard to believe that the Firelord would punish poor Chou. Think this through serisouly, Azula is a prodigy, she is smart, ruthless, and knows human nature very well, we know she can lie her way by Toph (noone else has so far) and is good a stragity, however the way her father is, he would more than likly punish her, since she was tricked and out smarted by a teen noble. In his mind she would be dishonering him and bring shame for her failer, on top of not catching the Avatar. This line of thinking might be twisted, but remember what he did to his son who spoke out to try and save 2 batalions of rookie solders from being used as cannon fauder. Though it's not likly, I hope Azula sees the light in the end. She was made into what she is by her father, she might be on the mean side, grumpy and a bit of a bully, but the way she acts in the show is not the way a person like that would be at age 16, she was formed into it by her father. Besides if she were to be punished, imagine what you could do with this, of all the people to rescue Suki and get her out of the preson, I've seen Iroh used, Zuko, the Gaang, Yue and even in one story Ty Lee and Mia, ven OC's, but I've never seen one where Azula got her out, it would also scare poor Chou to no end for her to save his butt. I look foward to seeing how this story ends, till next time, c-ya!

*Laughs loudly.* Once again, this story succeeds in bringing a refreshing style of humor to this website, and believe me, it needs it. And call me dense, but I was taken off guard by the revealed identity of our little listener.

Lovin' this.

2 parts in this I loved,

1“There’s a legend that when Madusara first opened his little place of business he refused to sit Avatar Roku because his robes were slightly muddy.”

“You’re kidding.”


“There’s a painting on the wall commemorating the event.”

and the second
“Okay,” Sokka stopped mid step. “Now even I felt that one.”

I find this a bit odd, he should have felt the first one, lacking any bending ability all sokka has is wepons and warriors instint, besides he does seem to have a doom sense about him, I look foward to seeing if you have an afterwar part with Chou telling the gaang how Azula is a complete featherweight. Good job and I'm looking foward to the next chapter.

This is great man
“I think I’ve cashed in every favor and spent I have no idea how much.”

“Sounds about normal for a date.” Shi grinned.
That couldnt be any truer, I'm gonna go out on a limb and say the female prisoner is Suki.

@->-
In memory of Chou, the bravest man to have ever lived...

Azula seems to be as challenged at dating as her brother is, there is something seriously wrong with a person when "I don't hate you.) is the best compliment you can give someone, anyway, I do wonder what will happen in the series, they have killed off kids in the show in the past (Jet) But I dont know what will happen to the princess.

Reading this has resulted in several broken ribs on my part, this is great. I dont know why but for some reason I keep wanting to believe that the woman they are talking to is ether Mia or Azula herself, I dont know why, I just think it fits the general theme of the story, also it would fit the twos run of luck. Personaly I think if Azula had a boy friend the world would be better off, instead of tourting the citizes of the world and bringing untold death and destruction, only 1 person would be on the recieving end...this sounds almost like some kind of sacerfice to a pagian god or something, keep up the good work!

I can't wait for the goodnight kiss! This is gonna be SO GOOD!