I love your FF.

Great story and great style!

nya i cant think of what to say besides it was a very good story. XD

AHH!! So awesome!! Ronon whump!Shep is my new obsession. I love your writing and absolutely loved this piece! And really, there's nothing else for me to say except for that. That, and the fact that I'm going to go to you profile and hope to God you have more Ronon/Shep stuff written, no matter what it is. Just - yes. Plz!

Cool. Excellent Ronon/Sheppard bonding.

I could kiss emergencyfan! And Alipeeps! A nebbyjen story and the whump abounds. Just wonderful. Have a happy New Year!

P.S. I told emergencyfan I could kiss you for making her write a story. Turn abouts fair play. Thanks!

Wow, this was one of the best Stargate stories I've ever read. You have a great descriptive style and you really captured the personalities of the different characters. Also you didn't make the story too dramatic or angsty; it was real, it was like reading an episode of Stargate: Atlantis instead of watching it, and it was about some of my favorite people on the show!

Thanks so much for sharing it with us!!

God bless!

Mara-DragonMaster

I really liked this. The snark with Rodney was perfect and Sheppard's trust in Ronon was wonderful to see. You have a nice descriptive style as well. My one concrit would be the POV changes - Teyla's thoughts in one paragraph followed by Sheppard's in the next with no break in between.

The collapsed bridge was a fantastic idea as was Ronon's knowledge that if Rodney stayed he would certainly try to help and would eventually need rescue too. Ha!

sheppard its sounds like is lucky ronon didnt move :) great xmas story :)

There be a whole lot of well done Shep whump to this fic...and I LOVE IT!

Oh my goodness, that was amazing.

Everything about it was perfect. Your characterizations were dead-on, the situation wasn't overly cliché, and you didn't shy away from the full frontal of Sheppard's injuries. It was very realistic.

“Trust me?”

“Through Hell…or high water.”

That was som excellent whumping.

GAH! Too short! You better get writing on that other idea! Loved it just the same...nice prompt! :)

Hey, it's imskysmom - this is the first Atlantis fic I've read in MONTHS and I loved it. Reminded me of why you always have been one of my favorite writers, Jen!

This was very nice, a cool exciting set up with plenty of spine tickling action. Really nice detail on the injuries and I'm a huge fan of Ronon and Sheppard fic. The POV jumped around a bit which was a tad jarring, but it was fun and an orginal set up.

Nice jobe.

Great story, mate! :)

Only - what's with the 'dry version' part of your title? Was there a 'wet' version of this tale too? If so, I am thusly intrigued and would ADORE seeing that one too, if only in order to compare the two together. ;)

Anyhoo - with THIS take - you've created wonderful characterizations of both Sheppard and Ronon. Very realistic and yet you've added some subtle yet equally awesome touches of your own that make them both come alive and be even more relatable and warm than they already are. And THAT is quite a lovely and impressive feat, my dear! And I can't see whatever it is that you post next.

:: hint. hint. ::
THE 'WET' VERSION!
:: NUDGE. NUDGE. ::
:: wink. wink. ::

;);););)

~Sharma,
luving this
fic loike whoa! :)

:: adds story to faves ::