Reviews for Heart of Lost Light

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Beserkians fury 2008-05-10 ch 17,	abuseThis was a good ending to a part of the full story. Can't wait for the next one to be revealed. Will Ash turn Team Rocket around and make them good guys? After all he IS the son of their boss. I hope Giovanni had a will writen out. Until next time... FARE THEE WELL FOOLIAH HUMAN!
Lord Pata 2008-05-06 ch 17,	abuseInteresting final for this second part, this one was shorter than the first one, I think that the first one was around 26 chapters long right? Then again this one was more focused in rescue Kari and since she was back well there wasn't much else to do for the moment XD Anyhow you sure have really good talent for this kind of crossover fics, I liked Pegasusmon and Nefertimon fighting together, they make such great team ^^ Good luck with the third part of this trilogy of yours, keep it up :)
PEJP Bengtzone 2008-05-06 ch 17,	abuseI wished you could try to make Pokémon/Digimon crossover, featuring Ash, TK and the other Digidestined, along with their Pokémon and Digimon, without featuring any shipping with Misty. But know to the main fact to this review; If you want to, you could use any of my DigiPokémon in your next story. I have two new ones, both of them are Armor Digivolutions for Pikachu; I think their names was ThunderWoodmon (Digi-Mental Egg of Hope) and SparkAngemon (Digi-Mental Egg of Sincerity). ThunderWoodmon is going to be a tanooki-like version of Woodmon, who use an electric version of Razor Leaf called Thunder, while SparkAngemon's attack is going to be a mixture between Hand of Destiny and Thunder Punch called Celestial Lightning Fist. Oh, and Raichudramon's attack is going to be an blue electric blade-like shockwave called Bluewave Striker. P.S. But, still, I see you as an idiotic amateur to moron author, not only because you actually support such a dreadful romance of forbidden love (Since Misty seems to be 5 years older than Ash in the videogames), but also because you are supporting non-canon shipping like the one between Yukinari and Risa, while she is her own brother's answer for a certain terrier-like alien leprechuan, who seems to be medical doctor, professor and magical potter, and even because of the fact that you made an interesting story involving Pokémon/Digimon-crossover, there TK was absent, although he is supposed to be one of the most important characters in a crossover between Pokémon and Digimon. OBS! This last part is not a flamer, just a dissing comment from a friend of unfairly treated people like Ash.
ComicMan416 2008-05-06 ch 17,	abuseWow! An awesome way to end part 2 of the 3 part story! I loved this one so much! Will I be in your next story of this trilogy? And will I meet back up with Ash? I look forward to the next story! I'll always be there to revierw for you!
Lord Pata 2008-04-24 ch 16,	abusenice chapter, it was really nice to see Gatomo and Kari reunited at last ^^ Things sure seems to be getting interesting more and more from this point :)
ComicMan416 2008-04-24 ch 16,	abuseWow! Another great chapter! I like the fact that Kari will be traveling with Ash in the Pokemon world, Just wondering. You planning to leave me in New York? Keep up the great work and I'll continue to review for you! I promise!
Lord Pata 2008-04-16 ch 15,	abuseis good to see Kari back but where is Gatomon? o.O I haven't seen her in the last 3-4 chapters, I think the last time she got mentioned was on chapter 11 if I recall well, and she supposedly was the one who was more worried about Kari? lol Anyhow is good to see Kari back now wonder what will happen next?
Beserkians fury 2008-04-16 ch 15,	abuseLemme guess, one more enemy? Or just the epilogue? One of the two, I know it. Until next time... FARE THEE WELL FOOLISH HUMAN!
ComicMan416 2008-04-15 ch 15,	abuseYes! Another awesome chapter! Really glad Ash and Kari are back together now! You plan on leaving me in New York or would it be possible for me to go with Ash and Misty? When they head back to Pokemon world? I just don't want to be in the same place as Jen. Keep up the great work and I'll continue to review for you!
PEJP Bengtzone 2008-04-15 ch 15,	abuseI think that you should make a chapter, there that Jen gets the punishment she deserves, once and for all. And I say that with true honor, not as an barbarian bastard, who doesn't show respect for people.
ComicMan416 2008-04-08 ch 14,	abuseWow! Another great chapter! I loved it and how you did Ash's father! I'm sure Ash'll realize how similar he and I are, conisdering we have a lot of the same things that each other has! I hope Kari returns. Keep up he great work and thanks for adding me! I look forward to the next chapters!
Lance the Dragon Master 2008-03-31 ch 1,	abuseIs this a sequel to a story of yours? Where can I find it?
PEJP Bengtzone 2008-03-31 ch 13,	abuseI wish you good luck with this story, pal. By the way, why do you refer Pikachu as a rat, if he is actually a mouse? Just wondering.
ComicMan416 2008-03-30 ch 13,	abuseWow! Another awesome chapter! Thanks for including me, my adoptive mom and Jen! Maybe you could do that for next chapter? I'm sure Ash'll be the one to save Kari! And a little side note on Jen. She's actually a member of Team Rocket! Yep, that's right! I'm sure the secret will shock everyone! Think you could do that please? As always, keep up the good work and I'll continue to review for you!
PEJP Bengtzone 2008-03-26 ch 12,	abuseI know this is to much asking, but can't you make a chapter there Ash becomes a DigiDestined, with his very own D3, or make a part in near the end, there the DigiDestined opens the DigiPort on a PC at a PokéCenter?

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