 Dragonneva 2009-01-01 . chapter 4I love it !! ^^ !! I saw that you've started a fic in spanish with a James/Severus pairing !! I'm crazy about this pairing I would like it if you could translate it in english too !!
I can't wait for the next chapter !!
Kisses
Drag' |
 Lawliet Tenshi 2008-11-28 . chapter 4L never did anything wrong, but Light killed him. He never even regretted it until now. He shattered L and didn't even think twice about it! LET ME KILL HIM! |
 Infinite Hypernova of Despair 2008-11-28 . chapter 4Fine, I'm giving you a review so don't take a month this time. I like the plot in general but you need to put everything in greater detail. In other words, quit rushing the whole plot. |
 Nusku 2008-11-27 . chapter 4DAMN RIGHT YOU BETTER FEEL PAIN RAITO! update soon it's wonderful! |
 xxDarkestShadowEmoxx 2008-06-13 . chapter 3I love your story please,please,please,finish it. |
 Fasolasi 2008-05-24 . chapter 3OH MY GOD! Why did you stop writing?This story is so great,it's out of the commun and in my opinion that really good!! love it,please continue writing! |
 wednesday1990 2008-05-14 . chapter 3Hm...Good story! Your english is a little off, but otherwise you did a good job.
Anyway, I can't wait for the next translated chapter. :) |
 Irvine Cypher 2008-03-23 . chapter 3i didn't understand the sacred rule. whatever it was, i'll pretend i understood it. |
 Emiliahh 2008-02-11 . chapter 3LOVE IT! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!! MOREE! Im actually not a Light fan BUT this story is very interesting..
Emiliahh
DOWN WITH KIRA-FACE! UGLY UGLY KIRA-FACE! |
 darkneko666 2008-02-06 . chapter 3Please do update this story I am dying to know what going to happen I wish I knew Spanish so I could read the rest of the chapters but alas I can't so I am waiting for the trans of it so I can read you have me hooked!!
Thank You for posting and hope to see more! this is going on my Story Alert! |
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 blackcat686 2008-01-16 . chapter 3Love the new chapter:3 And I'll be your beta if you would like, just message me and tell me if you would like to accept my offer:) |
 sai51592 2008-01-15 . chapter 3 Yes awesome story please update son ^_^ |
 Starchild49 2008-01-15 . chapter 3I don't think this is to bad. There are a few errors but other then that it's great! ^-^ Update soon! Ja~ne |
 MattTheGamer 2008-01-15 . chapter 3I can see that your trying really hard, it must really be a struggle. So I'll help you out if you want... interesting chapter though |