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Dragonneva
2009-01-01 . chapter 4
I love it !! ^^ !! I saw that you've started a fic in spanish with a James/Severus pairing !! I'm crazy about this pairing I would like it if you could translate it in english too !!

I can't wait for the next chapter !!

Kisses

Drag'
Lawliet Tenshi
2008-11-28 . chapter 4
L never did anything wrong, but Light killed him. He never even regretted it until now. He shattered L and didn't even think twice about it! LET ME KILL HIM!
Infinite Hypernova of Despair
2008-11-28 . chapter 4
Fine, I'm giving you a review so don't take a month this time. I like the plot in general but you need to put everything in greater detail. In other words, quit rushing the whole plot.
Nusku
2008-11-27 . chapter 4
DAMN RIGHT YOU BETTER FEEL PAIN RAITO! update soon it's wonderful!
xxDarkestShadowEmoxx
2008-06-13 . chapter 3
I love your story please,please,please,finish it.
Fasolasi
2008-05-24 . chapter 3
OH MY GOD! Why did you stop writing?This story is so great,it's out of the commun and in my opinion that really good!! love it,please continue writing!
wednesday1990
2008-05-14 . chapter 3
Hm...Good story! Your english is a little off, but otherwise you did a good job.
Anyway, I can't wait for the next translated chapter. :)
Irvine Cypher
2008-03-23 . chapter 3
i didn't understand the sacred rule. whatever it was, i'll pretend i understood it.
Emiliahh
2008-02-11 . chapter 3
LOVE IT! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!! MOREE! Im actually not a Light fan BUT this story is very interesting..
Emiliahh
DOWN WITH KIRA-FACE! UGLY UGLY KIRA-FACE!
darkneko666
2008-02-06 . chapter 3
Please do update this story I am dying to know what going to happen I wish I knew Spanish so I could read the rest of the chapters but alas I can't so I am waiting for the trans of it so I can read you have me hooked!!

Thank You for posting and hope to see more! this is going on my Story Alert!
Minasan
2008-01-16 . chapter 1
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blackcat686
2008-01-16 . chapter 3
Love the new chapter:3 And I'll be your beta if you would like, just message me and tell me if you would like to accept my offer:)
sai51592
2008-01-15 . chapter 3
Yes awesome story please update son ^_^
Starchild49
2008-01-15 . chapter 3
I don't think this is to bad. There are a few errors but other then that it's great! ^-^ Update soon! Ja~ne
MattTheGamer
2008-01-15 . chapter 3
I can see that your trying really hard, it must really be a struggle. So I'll help you out if you want... interesting chapter though
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