I love this pairing...

I think the ending is fine... Oliver's restraint shows how much he really cares. Nice work. There isn't nearly enough KBOW fic out there.

I enjoyed this story, it was very sweet. I've suddenly been converted to a Katie-Oliver fan, so I'm good with it. It was smart of you to leave out a kiss between the two, most would have put it in there, and it would have ruined the greatness of the story. Very well written, nice work.

aww this os really beautifully written, poor Katie but Oliver is as sweet as ever. Very sad to hear you've stopped as you are one of the best k/o writers out there. Does that mean your other story maintaining conscious thought has finished?

I personally like the way you chose to do this. To have Katie move on from her relationship so soon wouldn't have worked. This however was sort of touching. Good work

It doesn't need to be long to be beautiful. So many Katie/Olivers deal with the moment they both realise how much they mean to each other, but very very few show anything meaningfull before then, so well done for stepping up!
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