D'awwwww! That's so cute! I love the fact that he kept side-complimenting himself in the story. I think, though, I kept on seeing her saying, "Sit down, 'LOGAN'" instead of Lorcan. But, when I read the end, I'm like, you, are officially the best Vampirates writer on here! X3

aw...i wish it was that simple..i really wish them to be really together..and i really wish to be able to read black heart as well... *sigh* anyways..cute story! : )

Very nice, i like it.

:D

OMG! So amazing! write more!

FINISH THE STORY,FINISH THE STORY! Give them kids! Hearing little feet patter is soothing to everyone , I would LOVE to see the Captian's, um, REACTION, to those little feet, not to mention LORCAN'S. SO KAWAII!

OMG, I absolutely love this. I could almost cry with how cute it is. Aww, I always liked Lorcan!

Keep writing! :P

aw X3!

That was amazing! So cute! I hope Lorcan and Grace end up together... that would be the sweetest thing.

The next book comes out next month! SQUEAL!

Aw! thats so cute! I love it! you sould turn this into a full fledged story!

Love and Hugs to all,

Skylar

wow...sweet story...i love the books...but that's...awesome :)

such a cute, fluffly story. i love it.

i needed a happy upbringing story. thank you :)

very sweet! and a good story telling! I love it how you tell pther readers that havent read the books before anf told then vaguely what happened in the other books!

i think ur a good writer!

loved the story! 10 out of 10

I loved it! It was cute, and funny!

keep writing,

italy

Amazing I think it was funny and romantic...

...well almost!

Omg, i loved it, bubblemoon (yes that is her real name) it is so YOU! Ha , it made me laugh when u wrote slightly dim lol... and i love the well almost ending..hehe

xDarknight Vampirex