FINISH THE STORY,FINISH THE STORY! Give them kids! Hearing little feet patter is soothing to everyone +, I would LOVE to see the Captian's, um, REACTION, to those little feet, not to mention LORCAN'S. SO KAWAII!

OMG, I absolutely love this. I could almost cry with how cute it is. Aww, I always liked Lorcan!!
Keep writing!! :P

aw X3!

That was amazing! So cute! I hope Lorcan and Grace end up together... that would be the sweetest thing.
The next book comes out next month!! SQUEAL!

Aw! thats so cute! I love it! you sould turn this into a full fledged story!

Love and Hugs to all,

Skylar

wow...sweet story...i love the books...but that's...awesome :)

such a cute, fluffly story. i love it.
i needed a happy upbringing story. thank you :)

very sweet!! and a good story telling! I love it how you tell pther readers that havent read the books before anf told then vaguely what happened in the other books!!
i think ur a good writer!!
loved the story! 10 out of 10

I loved it! It was cute, and funny!

keep writing,
italy

Amazing I think it was funny and romantic...
...well almost!

Omg, i loved it, bubblemoon (yes that is her real name) it is so YOU!! Ha , it made me laugh when u wrote slightly dim lol... and i love the well almost ending..hehe

x~Darknight Vampire~x

Cute fic, the story was fantastic. I wish there was a Vampirates section, then these fics would be easier to find.

Haha ;D

i laughed a bit while he was saying the story.
i loved it it was cute!

love this story! I'm gonna have 2 do a Doctor Who version!