Hilarious story that plays out exactly like an episode from the anime! Brilliantly written. I do hope you continue. Please don't let this fall into the Abyss of the Unfinished.

PS. I find it hard to believe that poor Sun and Nagasumi still don't have the support they thought they had. Madness continues on. XD

Well done. It reads like an episode

D8

OH IS ON BITCHES.

next chap plz

Loved it! The humor of this anime was captured perfectly! I also have two Seto no Hanayome fics up. Care to look at them?

Very close to cannon, and surprisingly not complicated to read! However it's been a year now - how about an update?

The characterisation here is fairly good and the writing is decent. It seems like there's not much in the way of plot though and it's fairly short at the moment.

Hm... This morning I watched the whole first season of the anime... And tonight I shall review my first Seto no Hayanome fanfic! It is a good day! Anyways... Good story! Hope you manage to bring more fans to underspoken animes like Seto. Update soon!

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you have no idea how nyappy i am to see another Seto no Hanayome fanfic writer :)

Very well written story and like the others said, you captured the mannerisms and humour perfectly :)

I love this anime I watch it every day and I think you captured the way they act perfectly. UPDATE!

first people to review this...first to make this...very excited to see what's next...keep it up.

LOL! You captured their humour perfectly. It made me laugh so hard! Update asap

Finally a fanfic about Seto no Hanayome! You did a good job with this chapter. Cant wait for more.

Update soon.