Awesome poem! I really loved it and it just brought an excellent picture of Wilson to my mind. I loved how each word brought more to the poem and I couldn't find any words that were wasted or unneeded in this poem. I especially loved the ending.

I'm going to add this to my C2 community for poems just because it's so beautiful!

Wonderful! I think the imagery meshes very well. There are no wasted words; each word has a purpose that really defines the poem. It's very hard to do that, and I think you pulled it off very well.

My favorite lines:
Blue with the bristles
Taps on the floor, uneven.

Great job! :)