Really cute 3!

So, I couldn't help: food poisoning and the "did you get that from a movie?" – are you refering to DEBS? Had to ask, maybe it is just my imagination )

Anyway, good story! I think it could develop more the facts, because you have a lot of detailed situations you don't use afterwards, do you get what I mean? That causes the story to linger and breaks focus a little.

Best Regards,

Samantha

I like this. I was reading this chapter and I was like I wonder what if Brooke knew about Rachel/Bevin kiss during the senior project.

REALLY LIKED THIS.

beautiful ending...they are just so cute! Maybe another story?

Aww..im sad to see this end! But glad that it ended with a marriage proposal..maybe there's hope for a sequel?..hehe..

Nice ending..)..hope u continue to write more brachel fics!

Love this story! Yay a brachel fic...please post more soon!

Brachel

love it!love it!love it!

please update soon!

Awesome story so far .

I can't wait to read more .

That's my girl Rachel! I really enjoyed Brooke's email to Rachel, it was hilarious with just the right touch of sexy. I also liked how Rachel stood up for herself and how Brooke stood up for herself and Rachel against Peyton. I'm very interested to see what happens when Rachel arrives in NY and I'm also interested in Rachel's reaction to the attachment Brooke sent her. Update soon!

Oh, I was definitely waiting for this. It was definitely worth the wait, too.

Did you get my PM? Hopefully you guys thought about what I said in regards to spellshchecking and whatnot.

Hopefully you guys can reply and keep up the good work - well, I know it'll be good. :)

-OTHL

I'm curious as to where this is going. I hope to read more soon!

I really like this story so far. Can't wait to see what the new text from Brooke says. Update soon!

Good beginning, I like the fact that it is based around the friendship of Brooke and Rachel and not just another love relationship thing. Hope to read more.

Aw Brachel cuteness

love it