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Reviews For: Jealousy

Adi88 2008-01-07 ch 1,	abuseYeesh. Okay, I have every bit of respect for Shigure - except for how he’s an evil bastard - and he’s older than her, and everything, and he had his Dream by then so it probably - I mean, he could have held his own. Maybe. But. It’s a testament to both Akito’s extreme scariness and your mad writing skills at creating atmosphere in like two sentences that I kind of physically shudder at the idea. On Shigure’s behalf, I mean. “It’s yet another Souma lie, because although envy is green, it is the darker psychologically.” - Because you plus colors make Happy Adi. And it’s just fun to play off of the room-painting and… why does it immediately make me think of Cinderella? “Akito should be grateful; after all, Yuki is kinder. Yuki is closest to God. Her father would have been happy, proud.” - Adoration. She got off easy… and it’s just creepy-lovely to think of; that Akito is proud every time Yuki becomes more evidently hers because she’s thinking, “See, Daddy? You were right, I proved it.” Oh, they’re so deliciously screwed up. And perhaps he would have been less elusive if his parents hadn’t been so stingy, and had sold him to Akito instead. - Because it’s the best ending. The shudders. I know there’s every chance I should be shuddering for Akito. But, well, if he lived with her full time, and she with the god-ness… I don’t know.
UpperClassK9 2008-01-05 ch 1,	abuseHah. That's a rather, em, different take on it. But still great story, keep up the good work!
Katia-chan 2008-01-05 ch 1,	abuseSo stabbing, and to the point, and you've captured Akito's petulance so well. "It's her mother she hates, but the ones she's jealous of are Shigure's parents." -So perfect, because even though she always confuses one thing with another, jealousy and hatred are never to be mixed, and she's got the boundaries clearly set out on those two. It really is lovely...your drabbles always have a way of just knocking me over. TTFN
Angry Girl 2008-01-05 ch 1,	abuseWow.. warped logic and rather mean logic but who is Akito to care? she wants to be most important to them all and she loves Shigure so why wouldn't she wish for a way to tie him down and make him not be so elusive and defiant towards her and be 'mean' she maybe would have been able to have more of a hold on him then. And her going back to her father, and knowing that Yuki was better for her in the long run in that sense and that she had him he was closest to God so it shouldn't matter as much that the dog was being elusive but she does care and that bugs her that she cannot pin him down and you showed that very well. But I think even if his parents had he would have still been how he is sure he would be more tied down but he has years on her and clearly remembers the time when the bond was not so heavy... You did so much and worked so many emotions in so few words well done!

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