Again - brilliant!
A wonderfully written, astute, incredibly mature character dissection of Ginny.
You write with such assurance. I do hope you also write original fiction?

Wow impressive story. One of the best written stories I have read on this site, goes along great with our other fic as well

I loved this one too...

"He was only twenty-seven; of course he would sometimes have urges about other women. It was just the atmosphere of the ball. And it was Hermione. Of course this wouldn’t last long."

That line made me kind of mad at Ginny. But at least we now know why she left Harry...

VERY good! i was almost scared of Ginny, the way she was talking...but in a way i felt pity too

What bitterness...made me really feel sorry for her. So he lost the fire for her and she resented him for it. And she resented having a son who looked like him, except James had her eyes.

And now she was pregnant with Al, going to the ball and finding out that Harry had deeper feelings for Hermione. You've definitely conveyed that conflict within her.

wow. fantastic.
it really is wonderful seeing it from someone else's perspective. :]

Oops. Ginny's too smart for her own good... or blissfully ignorant happiness.

Beautiful darling, I'm amazed.

I love Ginny's side of the story. Thanks for writing this, it felt really insightful. I especially loved the tension during the dance. Mabye just one little critisism: "His hand seemed to fit perfectly in the [I]smell[/I] of her back."

That was a really well written and interesting one shot. Nice job! :)

i'd say that was more of a hermione/harry fic, since that's what you were hinting. i know it was in ginny's point of view but it wasn't really about them. you write really well though

well written. good job!

That was...er...yeah. It was very well written just not the thing I would read. I would guess that other people would love to read it though. :]