 'looks at name tag' 2009-01-22 . chapter 1Your writing is really beautiful. They way you wrote the characters was well done. Six stars :) I loved the last sentence. |
 Slave2Karma 2008-02-06 . chapter 1That last line gave me goosebumps.
Sad yet poetic, as any Edward fanfic should be. |
 simplekitten 2008-01-28 . chapter 1wow beautifull done, i enjoyed the fact that you kept it simple and realistic. the notion that Edward has his own inner demons is highly believable and the last line left me oddly satisfied. wonderful job as per usual. (even if i didn't realize you had done this little fic before) |
 Firefly-ErinMW 2008-01-13 . chapter 1very sad, but very good. I loved the ending! Everything was marvelously done. Two thumbs up! |
 Blackwing.Rose 2008-01-09 . chapter 1That was beautifully written, Dea. I liked the last line particularly. It's nice to see a little bit about Kim, much as I adore Edward and Sage. ^.^ |
 xXRemXx 2008-01-05 . chapter 1THat was so beautiful ^^ Was it a one shot? Im guessing not because you said it was tied to CI but no relation so far. I really liked it, all the other fics like this are really OOC or involve sex :P Yours was realistic though...it really could happen ^^ |