Your writing is really beautiful. They way you wrote the characters was well done. Six stars :) I loved the last sentence.

That last line gave me goosebumps.

Sad yet poetic, as any Edward fanfic should be.

wow beautifull done, i enjoyed the fact that you kept it simple and realistic. the notion that Edward has his own inner demons is highly believable and the last line left me oddly satisfied. wonderful job as per usual. (even if i didn't realize you had done this little fic before)

very sad, but very good. I loved the ending! Everything was marvelously done. Two thumbs up!

That was beautifully written, Dea. I liked the last line particularly. It's nice to see a little bit about Kim, much as I adore Edward and Sage. ^.^

THat was so beautiful ^^ Was it a one shot? Im guessing not because you said it was tied to CI but no relation so far. I really liked it, all the other fics like this are really OOC or involve sex :P Yours was realistic though...it really could happen ^^