Reviews for Heir to their Hatred

Reviews For: Heir to their Hatred

limitedsanity 2008-03-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseabsolutly exceptional story. heart wrenching story, but wonderful nonetheless. usually confession stories are all lovey dovey forgiveness where the parents except him and it’s happily ever after. if it does end badly, either they just kick him out, they were possessed or otherwise influenced, or the story is written poorly. your's is none of the above and i'm happy to have read it. once again, awesome story and keep on writing.
hikarisailorcat 2008-01-08 ch 1,	abuseaw! that was so sad!! i loved it! fantastic!! what was that song/words that were in bold?
Aavi 2008-01-07 ch 1,	abuseMan. This made me cry. I love it. I really don't know what else to say though...but you did an amazing job. :D
Thouqhts-of-Nothinqness 2008-01-06 ch 1,	abuseVery depressing in the beginning. But now everything seems better. Well, we would like if you just put the summary under the story instead of just putting it in your profile. It takes pretty while to scroll up and down to look for the story. It would take two seconds just to click on it when you see what it's about. And you know you're interested in it. I'm not being mean. But besides that, the oneshot was pretty good.
Nylah 2008-01-06 ch 1,	abuseDepressing, but good. Guess I have to go and listen to Metallica for a bit now :) Couple of thoughts. Why didn't Jazz, Sam or Tucker intervene sooner? I understand that they didn't for the story, but I think they would have. I can see why Danny wouldn't defend himself, they're his parents. I think you should put the summary where it belongs, for everybody to see. I usually don't read stories that say 'summary in profile', but this one came recommended in a C2. Nylah
Kid9535 2008-01-06 ch 1,	abuseI admit I skipped quite a bit but the plot was there. I didn't really take notice of the meanings until I caught sight of a few interesting things. From there I scrolled up and took note of a few sentences before scrolling back and reading the rest. There are quite a few Mr and Mrs Fenton bashing fics, this was rather indirect but at least Danny doesn't hate his parents. A nice new idea as compared to other 'loving parents who will accept you no matter who you are' kinds. The only thing that annoyed me was that you keep putting your sumamries on your profile and I have to scroll up and down just to refer to each one. It is rather troublesome. My eyes hurt from staring at the screen. But I didn't cry. It's rare for me to.
Thunderstorm101 2008-01-05 ch 1,	abuseI like it. Your stuff is really good; your oneshots exceptional. It'd be a little better if you'd put a description in the place set aside for descriptions, but it's good all the same.

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