wow... not gonna say it was terrible, but it could use editing, and more detail. also longer sentences, and more adjectives. EDIT

SO ! AWESOME !

love it! must write more!

i liked this

That was really good! I just discovered this couple and I find that I'm liking it a lot more than I thought I would. This story was one of the best NaruKiba stories I've read so far! Great job! My only (friendly) critisism (sorry, I can NOT spell) is that I think you could afford to use more pronouns or nicknames or something. You say "Naruto" and Kiba" a bit too much. But, like I said, amazing story. Love from an ~Angel~

i really liked it i think kiba and naruto are so good together thought i like sasuke and naruto better

Great story!