 FireKai 5/15/08 . chapter 1I loved this fic. It was so sad, but beautiful at the same time. One thing that I had been thinking about and didn't find a answer was right here in this fic. So, Dean enchanged his soul for Sam's life. I always thought that, if Sam died before the one year was over, Dean's deal would be broken and he would live. In this fic, I see that you have used that idea, but I was doing some research and I didn't find a single thing to prove this theory.
I think that, even if Sam dies, Dean would still go to hell, which is sad. But I loved this story, the countdown and Sam's feelings. It doesn't matter if it's not that way, because it's fanfiction, we write what we want and that is the truth for us. And the ultimate sacrifice Sam did was beautiful, saving Dean's life. |
 anon 1/5/08 . chapter 1 You know, oddly enough yours is the first story I've read where Sam saves Dean in the single most obvious way possible. And if it's wincest especially I know he would do it. I find this so much more likely than stories where Sam just basically cries, then shrugs off the fact that every day he draws breath his brother is being tortured in hell because of said breath and goes on and marries and names a kid Dean, I mean seriously those stories that came out like that right after the season ended made me sick. I'm a Dean girl and I was horrified at how they underestimated Sam. Canon Sam would do anything to save Dean even if that means kill or going darkside or if he can't save his life he would storm the gates of hell itself (easy enough he knows the address and has the key) and at least save his soul. Wincest Sam would do anything even this, especially if he called Bobby and Ellen first (and made sure to throw away all the other ammunitio) so someone could tie Dean down and force him to make it through the grief stage so he could live. Plus Sam believes in heaven where Dean doesn't, if he can save Dean's soul from hell, they could be together again on the other side, it'd be worth it. In short, love this story. |