 losing you 1/16/08 . chapter 1that was very cute :]]
(what will happen when kairi comes back, though? oh my goodness) |
 Dawnaven 1/11/08 . chapter 1Pineapple lol...pineapple is okay I guess...but cute one-shot :D lol. Loved it |
 tote 1/7/08 . chapter 1Very cute! Made me giggle X3 hehe. Keep writing, you're really good ; |
 youkai chick supreme 1/6/08 . chapter 1oh, that ending was all doom and gloom and then the cutesy line of "i think i like pineapple" really was unexpected. it was well written and cute but a little disconcerting. but it was good. |
 Cassie-san 1/6/08 . chapter 1Aww! This was adorable!
Very, VERY detailed i love the little rainbow bit.
That was cute. ]
Pineapples are so good... |
 dreadfulFOOL 1/6/08 . chapter 1Aww. That was so cute.
It's sad though, to think they're about to be seperated...
But, still SO cute. XD |
 Kirah Ruth 1/5/08 . chapter 1Kirah: You know... it's impossibly cute and sweet and /aw/, but so are a lot of stories with these two. It's hard not to be.
Ruth: There's one line that made it stand out, though... The moment where Sora and Riku just smile at each other was... I could picture it. It was exactly the right thing to write.
Kirah: Other than that... yay, fluff! Cliche fluff, pointless fluff, but fluff. |