that was sweet, but slightly melancholy... i like how you've written it from an outsider's perspective...

"I had the up most respect for Agent Gibbs though," should be: 'I had the utmost respect for Agent Gibbs though'.
"it was nice but it tell us who Kate was." should be: 'it was nice but it told us who Kate was.'
"Her new team walked away from the cemetery together and one of the women their put on some music and suddenly they were gone." should be: 'Her new team walked away from the cemetery together and one of the women there put on some music and suddenly they were gone.'
"I found through the grape vine that Gibbs quit and left the team to Agent DiNozzo," should be: 'I found through the grape-vine that Gibbs quit and left the team to Agent DiNozzo,'.

i liked it, it was kind of like one of those tributes to Kate.

good job! :P

Lovely little fic-thank you for sharing!:)

Amazing! Cant wait to read more of your stuff!