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well that was hot and just wow.

Wow. I'm just starting to get more into this pairing and I love what you've done here. It's so intense... Love their dialogue, especially at the end, and how you've shown that Cid knows him better than he thinks he does.

Man...I love you and everything you've written. ^_^ Another really awesome story! I hope that you'll continue it soon, eh, but don't let me rush you. Very nice characterization! They're perfect in this fic! Anyway! Good job! Until next chapter!

Absolutely Brilliant. Loved it from start to finish. Your use of language and the tension you build between the characters is well planned and executed. I love your style and they way you make it flow. A wonderful story and if you ever feel like updating this or writing another Cid/Vin fic you won't hear me complaining.

Peace and Pies

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