Aw this is so sweet! I LOVE SWEENETT!

Kerri.

Aww, a grand story. *Claps* Happy ending, by the seaside, hoo hoo!

Wonderful. =]

Good job! I can't see any gramatical or spelling errors, and I love your writing style. Here are my five stars *

Wow...What a better ending for the movie...But Did Mrs. Lovett(or Mrs. Barker) actually touch the fire? Or did Sweeney catch her before she fell?

Ah, now THAT'S an ending I can like.

Awhh this is much better than the real ending.


I love Mrs. Lovett and Sweeney Todd together.

=)

"Save alot of graves. Do a lot of relatives favors!"

Benjamin knew that there was only a few more minutes that were able to be used before time started back at regular speed,
-That part was a bit shaky, and this piece's grammar could use a bit of fixing, but for the rest of it I could hug you right now. Really, I could. You managed to come up with a relatively plausible [a bit farfetched, but really, how could one make Sweeney Todd fluff truly in character?] ending that didn't involve Mrs. Lovett's death. Which made me quite happy.

Fabulous story! I liked that much better than the actual ending. I mean come on, Nellie is so much better than Lucy. The last part was quite cute. Very nice job!

aw. i like your story. its really good. =]

aw i love this! so much better than the actual ending.

What’s you smilin' so big for?"
"We're home," was his only reply.
I love that part OMG that was like one of the best stories that i have read great work on that you should totally continue this

aw that was really cute! i loved this story! absolutely wonderful!

I really loved this story. It was very sweet, a nice break from alot of the other stuff posted. I'm a sap for stuff like this and this was perfect

This was awesome :]
Just completely and utterly awesome.

Sweeney Todd is my hero.
And you're an amazing writer.