Well... I don't know what to say. The idea was good - mirror and what inside it. But then story change in something unreal. Dialogues were dry. Harry was mean bastard who use Draco and tells him to die? Well, I can get over it, but not the fact that this bastard in one second change to someone who loves his own victim... And Dumbledore reaction - he just said him few words and that's it? He did nothing?
And why Draco forgive Harry just like that? He wanted to kill himself because of him! He is Malfoy, and Malfoys do not let someone hurt them and let go without revenge!
So I don't know what to say. I like the idea of mirror. As for rest... no.

um...what? i dont get it

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that's sweet i love it