I love this, and your style. The lyrics really add to it. Great job :)

Wow. I had to review! To be honest, you are a genius. No joke. This is just... beautiful. It's one of those fics that just inspires me! ^_^ Some of the lines really stood out, for example, the bit about Sakura's love for Naruto being like bubbles and the mental image of her compact mirror smashed up. (The symbolism...!) And there were loads of other ones too.
And I adore...well, the plot. The way you've portrayed their relationship is something so original and tangible but also so gorgeous it feels surreal. The way you describe how they look and feel... It's sorta intimate. Personal.
And the contast between very calm, poetic sentences and passionate, emotional ones is awesome. Like near the beginning, the part about them not expecting a love story. And then saying 'But **, they’ve got their hands on one'
God, I'm ranting. But this is just brilliant! Sque. ;P I'm all hyped up, sorry lol. Ehehe.

"There are nights where fireflies dust her cheeks and her eyes squeeze shut and she prays of flickering, flickering but never fading, feelings.

She says to herself, “God, if he doesn’t have a heart anymore, please let him have mine.”

And it’s just like that."

Ohmygoodness, Mishee. x3; Leave it to you to make me LIKE something in the Naruto fandom after--how many years?

I'll happily fangirl when it's /this/ good. *__*

This whole piece is so pretty--especially the part I quoted, that really got to me ♥--and I got into it right away. It's so nostalgic and beautiful and imagery-laden and and and--!

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♥ YOUR ANTAGONIST(A).

HEY MISHEE!