I can think of one word to effectively describe this story: Intense.

You had me gripped the whole time. There was thrill and sensuality to this piece that I have not seen for a long time on other stories that involve Macavity and Demeter.

Tell me though, do you ever plan on updating this? It’s a wonderful theme and I would love to see more of it.

-jelliclesoul635

Very very good! Please update soon!

it's VERY well written. You have a gift.

This is an awesome story so far! I think you have Macavity's character down perfectly... seriously. I mean, he's all sensual and stuff, and pretty sexy, but then again he's mean and scary. You wrote him very well. Demeter, too. She still kinda likes Macavity, even after what happened, right? Munkustrap is good, and I like how you made him all handsome, and that many of the queens like him. You had a few mistakes, like at the end of the second chapter you said "that" instead of "than", and I only noticed one spelling mistake (I can't remember where), but other than that, it was really, really good. I totally loved the sentence, "It felt good to be bad." Pure awesomeness. This was one of the better stories I have recently read. Update soon, man, and I'll be happy!